Another channel I figure in on youtube.

This is the channel of my friend with whom I did the video that got so many hits. I used my niece's photographs - ones that she took - for it mainly.

His name is Solomon Raju Kama.

http://www.youtube.com/user/unosolomono

My youtube channel

http://www.youtube.com/user/marshwiggle23
Please watch, subscribe ,comment ,befriend.

This was the poem I submitted that got shortlisted in Angelic Dynamo. - Meditations on Death

meditations on death.

for keith douglas

1

suicide is simple
takes one
no second

death
takes all
a whole fucking
lifetime

death and i

are won

2

when death
a mosquito
approaches
a stone,
a shadow
i
fall/s on it

is there a hand
behind the wings
can squash it?
or under the stone
can remove it?

a slight weight
it shifts about
uneasy, flutters
till it settles
abrupt or slow
perceptible
on its shadow
weightless
ly

ergonomics:
if you or i die
death "becomes" us

a dream
dissipates
smoke
nothing left
except, maybe
a cross become crown?


3.

The mosquito drinks my blood. i do not like it. i kill the mosquito. i am death.
Death kills me later. it does not like it that i took its place. i drank its blood.
Who kills death? does god? god drinks death's blood.
Mosquito, i, mankind and breath
Return to the no thing we all came from.

All things return to god behind death.


4
when you or i die
death becomes "us".

are we its shadows?
is death then, the Real?

i do not believe

we who believe
in words of power
the power of words
in the word love
the desire of ages
dayspring from high
bright morning star
will not die
but sing on
come back to life
e'en if we die
because of the heat
the word- fire of
the fiery image
of love that dost
conquer us all

& fortune
favouring
bestowing
its virtue
on the bold & the brave

and the ones lovelorn

on the cold and the grave

and the ones lovelorn

singing this poem
loud and clear
the poem of love
the one, eternal poem.


--
A.V.Koshy

For the record.

My poem Meditations on Death - for Keith Douglas was shortlisted by Angelic Dynamo.
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Meditations on Death by A.V. Koshy
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It lost.
It was on the net but now I'm unable to find it, so I can't put it here seemingly as a net snapshot to show it in the form in which it was shortlisted.

Hits

What do the number of hits one gets signify? Does it mean you are good at what you are doing?
My video on my autistic son has got more than 5000 hits.I put it in three places.
The hits keep mounting in youtube, in academici for a poem I wrote and I did get a lot of hits on educatorslogin.com, writing as learnertransmitter, while the place was alive and kicking.
However I also have places where I get no hits or zero.
Strange things happen on the net. An article I wrote on Declan Galbraith's song has surfaced elsewhere.

http://ego_you.totallyexplained.com/

My videos proliferate endlessly. The tagging does it.
My Facebook notes are read if I tag people.
Well , it all makes life a litle more interesting if nothing else.
Still have a long way to go.
I got votes for my poem by canvassing.
However things on the net are also fluid , you appear and disapear, I don't know if anything on the net has long life.
I remember writing a paper on Paradjanov that appeared in various places, as did two of my other papers but now those links have all been wiped out.