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Evokation - Autism for Help Village Project
The Autism For Help Village Project Evokation:
THE INTRODUCTION
I believe mankind's future depends on how we treat differently- and specially- abled people, as to whether we will flourish or perish.
"Where there is no vision the people perish - Hosea/OT."
The PLACE I will “evoke” in is India, most probably in the state of Kerala or Karnataka; more specifically in the close vicinity of Trivandrum and/or Bangalore, the capitals of these states. This is because I know the language and my people in Kerala, and have built up a fund of good will in Bangalore. Ideally I would choose a place near Bangalore but sometimes one can’t choose, so somewhere in Kerala would do as well. If both these places do not welcome the idea, or try to combine the notion of an autism village with that of a mental asylum, or express any form of resistance, I may look elsewhere in India. However, I believe that if we start with enough land – at least one hundred acres - but also in a small way, and work with children in the beginning, the locals/natives (including myself) are unlikely to offer any resistance. I want to start my evokation by considering possible challenges, and how I will overcome them, so I want to say that at the outset of the project that I will have meetings with local community leaders, and explain to them what I am doing and also about the resultant benefits for the community, to smooth and pave the way for my venture to succeed. Even after my project is up and running, regular local community participation will be eagerly sought after, through weekly meetings, planning sessions, etc.
A point I need to address right at the beginning is whether my project will do more harm to autistic people than good by supposedly taking them away from main view into a sheltered form of existence. My reasoning is simple on this count: the autism village will not be an isolated place but an open-gates project, with daily and constant interaction with local, state, regional, zonal, national and international people. There will be plenty of activity, and interactions. The only difference is this offers the autistic people an ecologically and environmentally safe space that can be home for them in a larger measure than a family's house would be a home, so that they can not only strive but thrive.
The community will be primarily humanitarian, looking towards the present and future well-being of all autistic peoples, connected mainly to both aestheticism and science in its outlook, but it may also bear the imprint of the work of people like Jean Vanier and Bede Griffiths. It will be called The Autism for Help Village Project. The name means that autistic people not only need help but also help us first just by being who they are.
The institution will probably be my own temporarily, to begin with, but I will collaborate with trusted and qualified individuals, friends and groups—including colleagues from Evoke, and with all the various groups already working in the field of autism, in India first and then abroad. My vision starts from and with South India, spreads through India to Asia and expects to work in equitable partnerships and in tandem with other places from anywhere in the world depending on:
a. if these places have only little or no help since I want to address need
b. the level of research and help they need, or can offer, and vice versa.
I would need at least 100 acres of space, I think, for this mission to make some sense, geographically speaking; if not at the outset, eventually. Maybe in the beginning I could start much smaller with just ten, fifty or seventy-five acres, since in the first phase I only want to set up a few things like a school and a farm. Later I would expand to residential capability, hospital, medical shop and finally definitely to an orphanage, a vocational training centre and/or college and an old age home. If possible, I would like to have the option to expand to 1000 acres, to include all needed facilities and grounds.
Virtually, I will use all the existing or developing popular-use computer platforms that are of any technological account to help my dream place in efficient running. I do not think any means too humble or too great for such a venture, as to be left out of it.
Technologically, the space I envision may finally become global if things like tracking and tagging become a part of the lives of people on a large scale. Initially, it would be more compact, technically and technologically speaking, concentrating on basic essentials like power and water and transportation sufficiency and virtual necessities like good communication facilities of which the internet would be on top of the list.
I would need the help of many experienced collaborators and entrepreneurs because I am basically only a visionary, but since my particular vision is not specifically shared by anyone in EVOKE as far as I know, I’ve decided to present a solo Evokation.
The Cause: It all started with my discovery that my son was autistic. There are decisive moments in one’s life, like meeting the resurrected Jesus at Damascus was one for Paul and being asked to get off a train in the middle of nowhere was one for Gandhi when he was in South Africa. Being treated as an “untouchable” was what helped B.R. Ambedkar to realize what his vision should be.
While trying to help my son, I found that no one in my place – Trivandrum - knew much about autism, including me, and I came across both parents and other children like my son, and found that they needed help as much as I, my wife and our other children did.
Help is not easily available for such kids in a place like India, especially down South. It is either:
a.non –existent or
b. too costly, or
c. found in too few places.
The challenge can be stated thus – more than 1,60,000 people (one lakh, sixty thousand, or one hundred sixty thousand) in the USA alone are now labeled autistic. The exact number across the world is unknown but high, and the number in India is also unknown but rising rapidly.
They need more from society – more in terms of input, and more in every sense of the term. I believe the appearance of autism in such large numbers, which is a recent phenomenon, is directly connected to:
a) the environmental and ecological degradation of our quality of life and nature ( the presence of heavy metals in water, mercury poisoning etc.) brought about by man after the rise of the industrialized economies,
b) our modern lifestyle (including medicines like vaccines, - faulty batches {there is very little screening in places like India where anything can be bought and sold over the counter in the black market}- the use of steroids during the time of pregnancy and the presence of psychological factors like stress) and
c) of course, genetics, the prime cause.
In a sense, obscurely speaking, autistic people are the children of the lesser gods that we are, and yet better than us in the happiness that they give us. The children are better than the parents in this case, doubtless. There seems to be no one cause for the autism spectrum which I refuse to call a disorder, and since it’s a neurological 'disability' or wiring that makes it a complexity whereby a child is ahead, backward and static at the same time in terms of "growth", not to mention that every autistic child is different from the other that gives rise to the autism “spectrum,” there is no one solution and seemingly no complete, perfect cure; although occasional breakthroughs and recoveries or healings are also reported giving us gleams of hope, at least in a trickle of individual cases as of now.
THE IDEA: These peoples need teachers who are specialists, therapists, psychological counsellors, parents who are given special training, support and education, international, governmental, regional, zonal and local help, spiritual help, help from parent groups, autistic support groups, developmental disability groups, humanitarian help, social and educational networks, medical networks, donors, dentists, pediatricians et al…
How does this tie in with environmental and ecological concerns? Isn’t this merely social entrepreneurship, engineering and innovation?
It ties up with everything.
My start may be closely-focused, but it can exponentially expand to help for all autistic children and adults, to the differently- and specially- abled of all sorts if they too catch hold of the vision, to all the caregivers of this community and finally to a big picture question.
If this is a new kind of ‘scourge’, since it’s not exactly an epidemic or a pandemic, how can it be stopped? Can genetic research help? Gene mapping may give us the clue as to how children in the future can be born without autism. So encouraging research for that would be important. I believe it can. So can scanning. Prevention is better than cure. Medicines can help too - so research on finding a medical cure, plus palliatives and other drugs must be encouraged to continue in indigenous and allopathic fields. But what to do with and for those already autistic for a lifetime? This is my big picture question.
Obviously, Hitler’s solution is not the answer.
For such children to grow up healthy, they need healthy food, vitamins, proteins, medicines, exercise and many other things. They need herbal medicines too.
Producers and farms of this kind, producing this kind of food, exist in USA. They produce GFCF food.
Not in India, not many yet.
The worst case scenario: Think of a child born autistic in a poor Indian household living on 2 dollars a day, a worker's or a labourer's child, as we were asked to imagine in an exercise on Evoke. Let us say he, rarely she, is the only child. Autism affects males more than females and comes from the father, if genetic. Let me tell you the ratio of expenditure, ideally speaking. The man would need 1/4th, the woman 1/3rd and the autistic child the rest of the money if s/he is to get any help. 2 dollars is ninety two Indian rupees at present. If you gave the man 23 Rs, the woman 30 Rs and the child 39 Rs what help would the child get? The actual answer is Nothing, in today’s world.
The food and other products, services, side products and crafts, produced in such a farm, has to be green, eco-friendly, environmentally non-hazardous and healthy and the energy/power for such farms sustainable and renewable. Water must be harvested. Costs must be minimal to be effective, which is the main thing as always.
The food and any other products - aesthetic crafts, art shows - , such a commune would make or create is not only for them but everyone, since even if they need this healthy - maybe primarily vegetarian and herbal (ayurvedic)- food, any surplus can go for others, especially the poor. Not only that, the food can also be bought by everyone in society , where it can perhaps be sold at a higher price to some rich customers, as Namdhari’s does, to ensure breaking even or hopefully even make profit, since the first consumers should be the autistic children and their families and they should not be deprived of it due to cost.
My project could not work as a non-profit therefore, I think, unless it has extremely powerful financial backers. I need to take further thought on this aspect.
To start a school, a retreat centre and a farm or a place or space where autistic people can be helped in every way they need help, including enabling them to be mainstreamed as far as possible, is my dream. For this I would need, first of all, arable land-- with water, power or energy, modern communication systems and farmers, cooks, and many other kinds of helpers. The community would be primarily agrarian and self-sustaining, hopefully.
This would also lead to work opportunities for the local population as well as countless possibilities for networking aimed towards employability of different sorts with autism groups, autism specialists, scientists, educationalists, doctors, psychologists, artists, designers, architects, pharmacologists, environmentalists, ecologists, pharmacists, governments at local, state, national and international levels, collaborators, innovators, entrepreneurs, genuinely spiritual people etc…since what I really want to move towards is an AUTISM VILLAGE. I would build the village on the lines of Roger Dean's willow water project, Sabeer Bhatia's nanocity and Vinay Gupta's hexayurt project etc... as an semi- urban, semi-rural resilient city/community.
The village could also be a specialists and helpers holiday or retreat centre to generate further funds, limited to use only for empowering visitors and the families of the autistic peoples. The latter, especially, could come and unwind, relax etc. Over the years an old age home for the parents, if widowed, and a home for autistic children and adults who are orphans or abandoned or those who perhaps cannot be looked after by their parents in case of disability or such other unforeseen eventualities could come into existence. I envisage at least one geodesic building for a school, a vocational training centre and a mini-university, a medical research and a publications- cum-library area, with one section of it to deal with the food produce administration, another with farm administration, another with administration of the retreat centre, another with that of the school and the other organizations like the vocational training centre etc. Each section would be added in as the vision unfolds in actuality. The farm could also have horses and a swimming pool for aqua and equestrian therapy, a playground, a stable, a place for the horses to run around in, a massage and yoga or gym(health fitness centre), a toy-land for social integration, a big restaurant, a different kind of food retail outlet, a different kind of medical store and many other things. A hospital and therapy centre for ABA, VBA, psychological counselling, speech therapy, therapy in communication techniques like PECS and sign language, behavior modification therapy, pharmaceutical research, dental care etc, would be a must because these peoples need a different kind of medical help from others. I will expand on my architectural vision after taking more thought about it, later.
The money: Without despising the day of small beginnings, I would use any and all money raised as efficiently as possible, or, if feasible, invest it with some agency (matching donor funds through Global Giving, for example) that would multiply it for my project; and, then, I would think of working on this self same proposal at a deeper level by approaching appropriate sponsors, philanthropists, groups or organizations like the World Bank who can fund the entire project in a much larger way.
I have an innovative idea which is based on “the power of one” and is about crowd-funding and micro-gifting which could raise a massive amount of money for this entire project if proper planning is done in advance and proper advertising and publicity exposure is managed. The fundraising idea is simple, to get everyone on earth to give just one currency note toward this project of ‘the power of one.’ An Indian would give a rupee, someone from the US a dollar etc. After conversion etc., even after deducting costs for getting this fund raising drive to work I feel I would have enough money to buy some land, and start a small school and a farm. From then on, if I can harness the power of social networking and innovation, engineering and entrepreneurship correctly, much of which I learned here, I can bring in the rest of the funds too.
Fundraising projects like music shows or other benefits would also be considered.
I do not think of this project as one that only takes. In return it gives us the happiness of these people in ensuring their welfare and also as it becomes self sufficient it will generate income in various ways throughout the future, ways including the farm produce and the other products the autistic people will eventually make, so that the end will be change for the world and a better future and some form of earthly salvation for autistic people to whatever extent it lies in my power to bring it about which are aims I hold in common with UEvoke.
My vision is long term and the village will have open doors so these children are not isolated and I am ready to wait for it to blossom and grow into a force to change the cartography of the future, however long it takes to be fully realized. As part of this, I would work into this long term projects issues of expansion - setting up centres elsewhere - and also issues of training future leaders who would carry on the legacy with the freedom to change it to suit change that will happen around us regarding research etc.
The budgetary and legal aspects, aspects of administration regarding forming a 501©3 trust etc., and groups and individuals I may collaborate with need to be worked out in more detail. I would also require legal assistance to work through bureaucratic hurdles and governmental requirements, licensing, etc., which are large challenges in a nation the size of India.
However at present I have decided to approach for help:
1. http://www.autism-india.org/worldorgs.html
2. http://www.urgentevoke.com
3.http://www.communicationdeall.org/
4.http://srishti.ac.in/
5.http://www.autisminternationalfoundation.org/autism-funding-Intl.htm
6.thelandofisrael.com
My resource persons will include all at the facebook group EVOKE Class of 2010.
P.S. My idea/dream/vision belongs to everyone. No copyright, intellectual property rights or patent required to replicate it.
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This project raises funds for
Phase 1 of project.
1. Buying enough land to contain the facilities and infrastructure needed to run a proper autism village. I would need a hundred acres to start with.
2. Building a school with adequate/cutting edge facilities.
3. Hiring teacher-specialists and autism therapists, autism-care personnel, autism experts and advisors, specialist agricultural helpers, cooks, administrative personnel etc.; and an architect and engineer, plumber etc to design the autism village. Income/fair wages to be paid to staff/employees.
4. Ecologically/environmentally sustainable and special-needs accessible grounds, school(s) and residential and administrative buildings, with grey-water capture/filtration (for gardens/grounds), perhaps renewable (solar/wind/etc) source electricity, available computer/internet capabilities, fans (or aircon if possible), cooking/refrigeration (and freezer for longer food storage), backup generator if possible, laundry and bathing facilities and adequate regular-use and special-needs access toilet and washing facilities as well. Media and recreational room/exercise and therapy facilities would be beneficial as well. Equipment for all offices, classrooms, medical facilities, food preparation, etc, and equipment for each resident, furniture, etc, should be provided.
5. Collateral administrative study exchanges (if possible) to locations in India, as well as Israel, Armenia, and possibly the US to study autism centers.
6. Money needed for setting up internet platform, web site, interactive parent/child site (for posting work, progress, needs, possibly chat or pictures/video/skype chat)
7. Fees to pay for setting up organization with lawyer and chartered accountant, engineering, educational and farming and architectural advisors and technological personnel and government, getting adequate resident-transport vehicle, smaller administrative use (for medical supplies, official visits, etc) vehicle, therapy bikes or horses for residents, etc.
8. Adequate gates, walls, fire/emergency accessible roadways, special-needs accessible pathways, garages for any vehicles, special-needs accessible and advanced playzones/playgrounds, fire hydrant/emergency prevention/management training and equipment, safety glass and/or safety gates on windows (which meet fire safety/exit codes); emergency ladders, emergency shelter provisions.
9. School supplies: white boards, possible blackboards, tables, maps, globes, desks, chairs, markers, pens, pencils, paper, other supplies, computer/tech support/equipment, wiring, toys, athletic and sports equipment, therapy training equipment, shelves, cabinets, counters, lockers, benches, adequate windows, doors, room dividers, wheeled chairs or other necessary support equipment.
10. Shelves, cabinets, counters, pantries for kitchen. Adequate cooking, refrigeration, freezer, other storage/preparation necessities. Food preparation areas (full access, and with safety equipment/special needs access in one area); pots, pans, cutlery, measuring tools, pouring tools, blenders, toasters, microwave, etc. for sustaining food needs of village.
11. Water therapy/swimming safety zone/exercise/training areas, equipment and personnel if possible.
12. Adequate visiting/meeting furniture, facilities and grounds for visiting experts, families, other groups.
13. Establishing a productive teaching/therapeutic/sustainable (organic) GFCF farm, composting pit, grey-water reuse zones, storage area for tools, harvesting equipment, drying or processing equipment, if possible.
14. Linens, uniforms, tee shirts, aprons, pillows, mattresses, bedding, adequate seasonal clothing and/or protection (rain gear, etc).
15. On-grounds delivery/conveyance equipment and adequate paths for wheeling carts, etc. from one location to another.
16. Radio and telephone communications, music room, television/media room.
17. Safety monitors onsite, in rooms, at entrances/exits. Sound, video, and generator backup as possible. Fire alarms, carbon monoxide alarms, smoke alarms, motion sensors, defibrillators, and emergency equipment as necessary/possible.
18. Lighting and lights for all facilities , including emergency generator etc.
19. A medical store/dispensary on the premises with medicines and vitamins etc. for autistic people, specially stocked and pharmaceutical advisor and personnel.
20. A Restaurant for residents, staff, guests, special occasions, etc.; ideally would showcase the produce of the Village gardens and the culinary skills (even if at basic levels) of specially-trained residents, as well as hired chefs/staff.
21. A shop selling local arts and crafts etc, created in the Village, and perhaps in cooperation with local artisans from the surrounding communities…
22. A shop selling all goods needed for inhabitants, workers and visitosr, plus the extra produce, fruits, juices, GFCF foods, and other foods/baked goods from the farm and restaurant.
THE INTRODUCTION
I believe mankind's future depends on how we treat differently- and specially- abled people, as to whether we will flourish or perish.
"Where there is no vision the people perish - Hosea/OT."
The PLACE I will “evoke” in is India, most probably in the state of Kerala or Karnataka; more specifically in the close vicinity of Trivandrum and/or Bangalore, the capitals of these states. This is because I know the language and my people in Kerala, and have built up a fund of good will in Bangalore. Ideally I would choose a place near Bangalore but sometimes one can’t choose, so somewhere in Kerala would do as well. If both these places do not welcome the idea, or try to combine the notion of an autism village with that of a mental asylum, or express any form of resistance, I may look elsewhere in India. However, I believe that if we start with enough land – at least one hundred acres - but also in a small way, and work with children in the beginning, the locals/natives (including myself) are unlikely to offer any resistance. I want to start my evokation by considering possible challenges, and how I will overcome them, so I want to say that at the outset of the project that I will have meetings with local community leaders, and explain to them what I am doing and also about the resultant benefits for the community, to smooth and pave the way for my venture to succeed. Even after my project is up and running, regular local community participation will be eagerly sought after, through weekly meetings, planning sessions, etc.
A point I need to address right at the beginning is whether my project will do more harm to autistic people than good by supposedly taking them away from main view into a sheltered form of existence. My reasoning is simple on this count: the autism village will not be an isolated place but an open-gates project, with daily and constant interaction with local, state, regional, zonal, national and international people. There will be plenty of activity, and interactions. The only difference is this offers the autistic people an ecologically and environmentally safe space that can be home for them in a larger measure than a family's house would be a home, so that they can not only strive but thrive.
The community will be primarily humanitarian, looking towards the present and future well-being of all autistic peoples, connected mainly to both aestheticism and science in its outlook, but it may also bear the imprint of the work of people like Jean Vanier and Bede Griffiths. It will be called The Autism for Help Village Project. The name means that autistic people not only need help but also help us first just by being who they are.
The institution will probably be my own temporarily, to begin with, but I will collaborate with trusted and qualified individuals, friends and groups—including colleagues from Evoke, and with all the various groups already working in the field of autism, in India first and then abroad. My vision starts from and with South India, spreads through India to Asia and expects to work in equitable partnerships and in tandem with other places from anywhere in the world depending on:
a. if these places have only little or no help since I want to address need
b. the level of research and help they need, or can offer, and vice versa.
I would need at least 100 acres of space, I think, for this mission to make some sense, geographically speaking; if not at the outset, eventually. Maybe in the beginning I could start much smaller with just ten, fifty or seventy-five acres, since in the first phase I only want to set up a few things like a school and a farm. Later I would expand to residential capability, hospital, medical shop and finally definitely to an orphanage, a vocational training centre and/or college and an old age home. If possible, I would like to have the option to expand to 1000 acres, to include all needed facilities and grounds.
Virtually, I will use all the existing or developing popular-use computer platforms that are of any technological account to help my dream place in efficient running. I do not think any means too humble or too great for such a venture, as to be left out of it.
Technologically, the space I envision may finally become global if things like tracking and tagging become a part of the lives of people on a large scale. Initially, it would be more compact, technically and technologically speaking, concentrating on basic essentials like power and water and transportation sufficiency and virtual necessities like good communication facilities of which the internet would be on top of the list.
I would need the help of many experienced collaborators and entrepreneurs because I am basically only a visionary, but since my particular vision is not specifically shared by anyone in EVOKE as far as I know, I’ve decided to present a solo Evokation.
The Cause: It all started with my discovery that my son was autistic. There are decisive moments in one’s life, like meeting the resurrected Jesus at Damascus was one for Paul and being asked to get off a train in the middle of nowhere was one for Gandhi when he was in South Africa. Being treated as an “untouchable” was what helped B.R. Ambedkar to realize what his vision should be.
While trying to help my son, I found that no one in my place – Trivandrum - knew much about autism, including me, and I came across both parents and other children like my son, and found that they needed help as much as I, my wife and our other children did.
Help is not easily available for such kids in a place like India, especially down South. It is either:
a.non –existent or
b. too costly, or
c. found in too few places.
The challenge can be stated thus – more than 1,60,000 people (one lakh, sixty thousand, or one hundred sixty thousand) in the USA alone are now labeled autistic. The exact number across the world is unknown but high, and the number in India is also unknown but rising rapidly.
They need more from society – more in terms of input, and more in every sense of the term. I believe the appearance of autism in such large numbers, which is a recent phenomenon, is directly connected to:
a) the environmental and ecological degradation of our quality of life and nature ( the presence of heavy metals in water, mercury poisoning etc.) brought about by man after the rise of the industrialized economies,
b) our modern lifestyle (including medicines like vaccines, - faulty batches {there is very little screening in places like India where anything can be bought and sold over the counter in the black market}- the use of steroids during the time of pregnancy and the presence of psychological factors like stress) and
c) of course, genetics, the prime cause.
In a sense, obscurely speaking, autistic people are the children of the lesser gods that we are, and yet better than us in the happiness that they give us. The children are better than the parents in this case, doubtless. There seems to be no one cause for the autism spectrum which I refuse to call a disorder, and since it’s a neurological 'disability' or wiring that makes it a complexity whereby a child is ahead, backward and static at the same time in terms of "growth", not to mention that every autistic child is different from the other that gives rise to the autism “spectrum,” there is no one solution and seemingly no complete, perfect cure; although occasional breakthroughs and recoveries or healings are also reported giving us gleams of hope, at least in a trickle of individual cases as of now.
THE IDEA: These peoples need teachers who are specialists, therapists, psychological counsellors, parents who are given special training, support and education, international, governmental, regional, zonal and local help, spiritual help, help from parent groups, autistic support groups, developmental disability groups, humanitarian help, social and educational networks, medical networks, donors, dentists, pediatricians et al…
How does this tie in with environmental and ecological concerns? Isn’t this merely social entrepreneurship, engineering and innovation?
It ties up with everything.
My start may be closely-focused, but it can exponentially expand to help for all autistic children and adults, to the differently- and specially- abled of all sorts if they too catch hold of the vision, to all the caregivers of this community and finally to a big picture question.
If this is a new kind of ‘scourge’, since it’s not exactly an epidemic or a pandemic, how can it be stopped? Can genetic research help? Gene mapping may give us the clue as to how children in the future can be born without autism. So encouraging research for that would be important. I believe it can. So can scanning. Prevention is better than cure. Medicines can help too - so research on finding a medical cure, plus palliatives and other drugs must be encouraged to continue in indigenous and allopathic fields. But what to do with and for those already autistic for a lifetime? This is my big picture question.
Obviously, Hitler’s solution is not the answer.
For such children to grow up healthy, they need healthy food, vitamins, proteins, medicines, exercise and many other things. They need herbal medicines too.
Producers and farms of this kind, producing this kind of food, exist in USA. They produce GFCF food.
Not in India, not many yet.
The worst case scenario: Think of a child born autistic in a poor Indian household living on 2 dollars a day, a worker's or a labourer's child, as we were asked to imagine in an exercise on Evoke. Let us say he, rarely she, is the only child. Autism affects males more than females and comes from the father, if genetic. Let me tell you the ratio of expenditure, ideally speaking. The man would need 1/4th, the woman 1/3rd and the autistic child the rest of the money if s/he is to get any help. 2 dollars is ninety two Indian rupees at present. If you gave the man 23 Rs, the woman 30 Rs and the child 39 Rs what help would the child get? The actual answer is Nothing, in today’s world.
The food and other products, services, side products and crafts, produced in such a farm, has to be green, eco-friendly, environmentally non-hazardous and healthy and the energy/power for such farms sustainable and renewable. Water must be harvested. Costs must be minimal to be effective, which is the main thing as always.
The food and any other products - aesthetic crafts, art shows - , such a commune would make or create is not only for them but everyone, since even if they need this healthy - maybe primarily vegetarian and herbal (ayurvedic)- food, any surplus can go for others, especially the poor. Not only that, the food can also be bought by everyone in society , where it can perhaps be sold at a higher price to some rich customers, as Namdhari’s does, to ensure breaking even or hopefully even make profit, since the first consumers should be the autistic children and their families and they should not be deprived of it due to cost.
My project could not work as a non-profit therefore, I think, unless it has extremely powerful financial backers. I need to take further thought on this aspect.
To start a school, a retreat centre and a farm or a place or space where autistic people can be helped in every way they need help, including enabling them to be mainstreamed as far as possible, is my dream. For this I would need, first of all, arable land-- with water, power or energy, modern communication systems and farmers, cooks, and many other kinds of helpers. The community would be primarily agrarian and self-sustaining, hopefully.
This would also lead to work opportunities for the local population as well as countless possibilities for networking aimed towards employability of different sorts with autism groups, autism specialists, scientists, educationalists, doctors, psychologists, artists, designers, architects, pharmacologists, environmentalists, ecologists, pharmacists, governments at local, state, national and international levels, collaborators, innovators, entrepreneurs, genuinely spiritual people etc…since what I really want to move towards is an AUTISM VILLAGE. I would build the village on the lines of Roger Dean's willow water project, Sabeer Bhatia's nanocity and Vinay Gupta's hexayurt project etc... as an semi- urban, semi-rural resilient city/community.
The village could also be a specialists and helpers holiday or retreat centre to generate further funds, limited to use only for empowering visitors and the families of the autistic peoples. The latter, especially, could come and unwind, relax etc. Over the years an old age home for the parents, if widowed, and a home for autistic children and adults who are orphans or abandoned or those who perhaps cannot be looked after by their parents in case of disability or such other unforeseen eventualities could come into existence. I envisage at least one geodesic building for a school, a vocational training centre and a mini-university, a medical research and a publications- cum-library area, with one section of it to deal with the food produce administration, another with farm administration, another with administration of the retreat centre, another with that of the school and the other organizations like the vocational training centre etc. Each section would be added in as the vision unfolds in actuality. The farm could also have horses and a swimming pool for aqua and equestrian therapy, a playground, a stable, a place for the horses to run around in, a massage and yoga or gym(health fitness centre), a toy-land for social integration, a big restaurant, a different kind of food retail outlet, a different kind of medical store and many other things. A hospital and therapy centre for ABA, VBA, psychological counselling, speech therapy, therapy in communication techniques like PECS and sign language, behavior modification therapy, pharmaceutical research, dental care etc, would be a must because these peoples need a different kind of medical help from others. I will expand on my architectural vision after taking more thought about it, later.
The money: Without despising the day of small beginnings, I would use any and all money raised as efficiently as possible, or, if feasible, invest it with some agency (matching donor funds through Global Giving, for example) that would multiply it for my project; and, then, I would think of working on this self same proposal at a deeper level by approaching appropriate sponsors, philanthropists, groups or organizations like the World Bank who can fund the entire project in a much larger way.
I have an innovative idea which is based on “the power of one” and is about crowd-funding and micro-gifting which could raise a massive amount of money for this entire project if proper planning is done in advance and proper advertising and publicity exposure is managed. The fundraising idea is simple, to get everyone on earth to give just one currency note toward this project of ‘the power of one.’ An Indian would give a rupee, someone from the US a dollar etc. After conversion etc., even after deducting costs for getting this fund raising drive to work I feel I would have enough money to buy some land, and start a small school and a farm. From then on, if I can harness the power of social networking and innovation, engineering and entrepreneurship correctly, much of which I learned here, I can bring in the rest of the funds too.
Fundraising projects like music shows or other benefits would also be considered.
I do not think of this project as one that only takes. In return it gives us the happiness of these people in ensuring their welfare and also as it becomes self sufficient it will generate income in various ways throughout the future, ways including the farm produce and the other products the autistic people will eventually make, so that the end will be change for the world and a better future and some form of earthly salvation for autistic people to whatever extent it lies in my power to bring it about which are aims I hold in common with UEvoke.
My vision is long term and the village will have open doors so these children are not isolated and I am ready to wait for it to blossom and grow into a force to change the cartography of the future, however long it takes to be fully realized. As part of this, I would work into this long term projects issues of expansion - setting up centres elsewhere - and also issues of training future leaders who would carry on the legacy with the freedom to change it to suit change that will happen around us regarding research etc.
The budgetary and legal aspects, aspects of administration regarding forming a 501©3 trust etc., and groups and individuals I may collaborate with need to be worked out in more detail. I would also require legal assistance to work through bureaucratic hurdles and governmental requirements, licensing, etc., which are large challenges in a nation the size of India.
However at present I have decided to approach for help:
1. http://www.autism-india.org/worldorgs.html
2. http://www.urgentevoke.com
3.http://www.communicationdeall.org/
4.http://srishti.ac.in/
5.http://www.autisminternationalfoundation.org/autism-funding-Intl.htm
6.thelandofisrael.com
My resource persons will include all at the facebook group EVOKE Class of 2010.
P.S. My idea/dream/vision belongs to everyone. No copyright, intellectual property rights or patent required to replicate it.
.
This project raises funds for
Phase 1 of project.
1. Buying enough land to contain the facilities and infrastructure needed to run a proper autism village. I would need a hundred acres to start with.
2. Building a school with adequate/cutting edge facilities.
3. Hiring teacher-specialists and autism therapists, autism-care personnel, autism experts and advisors, specialist agricultural helpers, cooks, administrative personnel etc.; and an architect and engineer, plumber etc to design the autism village. Income/fair wages to be paid to staff/employees.
4. Ecologically/environmentally sustainable and special-needs accessible grounds, school(s) and residential and administrative buildings, with grey-water capture/filtration (for gardens/grounds), perhaps renewable (solar/wind/etc) source electricity, available computer/internet capabilities, fans (or aircon if possible), cooking/refrigeration (and freezer for longer food storage), backup generator if possible, laundry and bathing facilities and adequate regular-use and special-needs access toilet and washing facilities as well. Media and recreational room/exercise and therapy facilities would be beneficial as well. Equipment for all offices, classrooms, medical facilities, food preparation, etc, and equipment for each resident, furniture, etc, should be provided.
5. Collateral administrative study exchanges (if possible) to locations in India, as well as Israel, Armenia, and possibly the US to study autism centers.
6. Money needed for setting up internet platform, web site, interactive parent/child site (for posting work, progress, needs, possibly chat or pictures/video/skype chat)
7. Fees to pay for setting up organization with lawyer and chartered accountant, engineering, educational and farming and architectural advisors and technological personnel and government, getting adequate resident-transport vehicle, smaller administrative use (for medical supplies, official visits, etc) vehicle, therapy bikes or horses for residents, etc.
8. Adequate gates, walls, fire/emergency accessible roadways, special-needs accessible pathways, garages for any vehicles, special-needs accessible and advanced playzones/playgrounds, fire hydrant/emergency prevention/management training and equipment, safety glass and/or safety gates on windows (which meet fire safety/exit codes); emergency ladders, emergency shelter provisions.
9. School supplies: white boards, possible blackboards, tables, maps, globes, desks, chairs, markers, pens, pencils, paper, other supplies, computer/tech support/equipment, wiring, toys, athletic and sports equipment, therapy training equipment, shelves, cabinets, counters, lockers, benches, adequate windows, doors, room dividers, wheeled chairs or other necessary support equipment.
10. Shelves, cabinets, counters, pantries for kitchen. Adequate cooking, refrigeration, freezer, other storage/preparation necessities. Food preparation areas (full access, and with safety equipment/special needs access in one area); pots, pans, cutlery, measuring tools, pouring tools, blenders, toasters, microwave, etc. for sustaining food needs of village.
11. Water therapy/swimming safety zone/exercise/training areas, equipment and personnel if possible.
12. Adequate visiting/meeting furniture, facilities and grounds for visiting experts, families, other groups.
13. Establishing a productive teaching/therapeutic/sustainable (organic) GFCF farm, composting pit, grey-water reuse zones, storage area for tools, harvesting equipment, drying or processing equipment, if possible.
14. Linens, uniforms, tee shirts, aprons, pillows, mattresses, bedding, adequate seasonal clothing and/or protection (rain gear, etc).
15. On-grounds delivery/conveyance equipment and adequate paths for wheeling carts, etc. from one location to another.
16. Radio and telephone communications, music room, television/media room.
17. Safety monitors onsite, in rooms, at entrances/exits. Sound, video, and generator backup as possible. Fire alarms, carbon monoxide alarms, smoke alarms, motion sensors, defibrillators, and emergency equipment as necessary/possible.
18. Lighting and lights for all facilities , including emergency generator etc.
19. A medical store/dispensary on the premises with medicines and vitamins etc. for autistic people, specially stocked and pharmaceutical advisor and personnel.
20. A Restaurant for residents, staff, guests, special occasions, etc.; ideally would showcase the produce of the Village gardens and the culinary skills (even if at basic levels) of specially-trained residents, as well as hired chefs/staff.
21. A shop selling local arts and crafts etc, created in the Village, and perhaps in cooperation with local artisans from the surrounding communities…
22. A shop selling all goods needed for inhabitants, workers and visitosr, plus the extra produce, fruits, juices, GFCF foods, and other foods/baked goods from the farm and restaurant.
Thursday, March 11, 2010
Next poem shortlisted again on angelic dynamo - here's the documentary evidence.
Alexander Freer This week:
Something is wrong but we may not need an operation by Daphna El-Roy
Occidente Express by Andrea D'Urso
derrida✻ by A.V. Koshy
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Something is wrong but we may not need an operation by Daphna El-Roy
Occidente Express by Andrea D'Urso
derrida✻ by A.V. Koshy
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Thursday, February 04, 2010
Ecocriticism
Christian Eco-theology: A Brief Overview
By Dr. A.V. Koshy
I want to examine the Bible as an ancient, Asian, religious, eco-critical text and make the effort to find an alternative Christianity within the Christian tradition that may still be other-worldly but is not therefore, as is commonly considered, detrimental to the earth. Au contraire, it is instead beneficial to this world’s ecology. This will of necessity mean a deconstruction of some commonly held or perceived notions of Christian theology as well as of the ecological world’s perception of Christianity as a threat to the future well-being of mankind. My reading has been influenced by Derrida but it does not mean that it is Deridean.
I would like to start with the etymology of the name Adam.
“Adam is traditionally the first human male, but that tradition is presently under attack. See Eve or The Chaotic Set Theory for the counter argument.
Adam is one of five words that indicate a man (words like dude, guy etc). This particular word indicates man as a being created from material; a dustling, or earthling. Adam is the masculine derivation of the root ('dm 25 and 26, Hebrew sounds*). The feminine derivation (adamah 25b, Hebrew sounds) indicates the ruddy earth found in the Middle East and means acre, ground, land. The words (adom, adem 26a, b, Hebrew sounds) indicate the typical red color of that earth.
The name Adam means Earthling.
Other names from this same stock are, Edom - the nickname of Esau - which also means red, ruddy, and Admah.
Other names that have to do with words that mean man are Enosh (Mortal), Gabriel (God's Man), Methushael (Man Of God) and perhaps Zechariah (YHWH's Male) and Ishi (My Man).
A name that may be a playful reference to the name Adam is Javan, Mud Man.”
(http://www.abarim-publications.com/Meaning/Adam.html)
The binary opposition is between the heavenly and the earthly, throughout the traditional reading of the Bible. However the points of reconciliation are also there in an alternative reading of the Bible, in Jesus as he is represented in the gospels, in some of Blake's and Hopkins’ ideas, in Francis of Assisi’s yearning to preach the gospel to "all" etc.
To start with, a reading of some sections of Genesis may be essential. In the first section Adam is shown as one who can eat all the fruits in the garden including of the tree of eternal life, except one, and name – a divine function - all the living creatures. He is given Eve as a helper and it is more or less clear that their job is not looking after the garden or the living creatures but enjoying fellowship with God and remaining in their rightful place in the scheme of things, as the crown( highpoint) of creation.
When they fall, they are not tempted by the serpent, according to my ecological reading, though this can be combated - but either by Satan entering the serpent or Satan coming to Eve in the ‘form’ of a serpent. Having fallen, they are shown to be no longer in their rightful place. God does not want them to use the vegetation for clothing but animal's skins. This might offend an eco-critic. However, the validity of such a decision would depend on the geography of the area that is unknown. But it is also double edged, in that God seems to love plants and trees more than animals. Adam now has to work and vegetarianism is no longer the order of the day. Delight and Paradise is lost to both of them.
When Cain offers fruits etc., to God, God's displeasure may be at the fact that he tried his hand at farming but is unable to do it well. He is unable to bring him the "best produce." Similarly, the same care for agrarian products that should not be wantonly destroyed is perhaps shown. Contrary to expectation the early revelation of God as creator of the people in the land of Nod and the two in Eden- that is, of a special man and a woman who herald the next step in evolution as not just of the human race, ushering in a new age for the race of mankind - is "agrarian" in outlook. Cain is a 'poor' gardener while Abel tends the flock well, though he continues the tradition of slaughtering animals, maybe in remembrance of the story of his parents as to where their clothes came from.
The things written so far have been addressed more to Christians to remove certain innate biases they have developed over the years in reading the Bible, to see it only as a spiritual text.
Now we turn to a very interesting facet in the King James translation of the Bible. I do not know Hebrew or Greek but even in the Amplified Version an echo - two echoes- of what the translators of the KJV brought out cannot be entirely stifled.
It is about the earth as a living being. Adam is earthling -child of the earth - from dust to dust - but the earth itself is different. Blood is also considered living, interestingly, metaphorically.
8And Cain said to his brother, [b]Let us go out to the field. And when they were in the field, Cain rose up against Abel his brother and killed him.(B)
9And the Lord said to Cain, Where is Abel your brother? And he said, I do not know. Am I my brother's keeper?
10And [the Lord] said, What have you done? The voice of your brother's blood is crying to Me from the ground.
11And now you are cursed by reason of the earth, which has opened its mouth to receive your brother's [shed] blood from your hand.
12When you till the ground, it shall no longer yield to you its strength; you shall be a fugitive and a vagabond on the earth [in perpetual exile, a degraded outcast].
The earth has a mouth, - personification - does not want to drink blood, again an agrarian trait, - and turns against its murderous child by appealing to a higher power for justice – “by reason of the earth”. It will not yield its strength from then on to Cain.
Now the interesting thing is this: while the Amplified Bible uses "it" for the earth the KJV uses "she." Which translation is correct? I believe both are. Any scripture worth its salt deals with individuality, family and community as the foundation stones and the Bible which may be the archetype of all Scriptures deals, as it should, first with the individuality of the plural Elohim, with an unmentioned feminine aspect to Him that is hinted at in the verse that says "in the image of God created he them, male and female created he them" in the first version of the story of creation in Genesis, then with a brief mention of a community that seems to be not very relevant - the dwellers of Nod etc, then with mothers , Eve and the Earth and also with family, or children, sons , wives and grandchildren, dealing simultaneously also with the ideas of work, reproduction, fertility, sacrifice ( of flora and fauna) and the formation of new communities. The humility of these early men and women is noticeable in that they understand that they have to be allied with the forces of nature - represented by how Adam's disobedience and Cain's murder is punished symbolically, and literally, both figuratively and metaphorically by references to the earth mother or the living "it" or organism that the earth is that is being displeased with their actions. Thus it will bring forth “thorns and thistles” to Adam for choosing mortality over eternal life and withhold its strength from Cain for murder.
The message is clear if we read it this way. The Deity and the earth preferred sheep-herders and genuine farmers to the artificers and metalworkers that then came up from Cain's line - people like Tubal Cain - the first industrialists, in a sense, because the latter would try to preserve the natural balance of the earth , instead of upsetting it. There had come about a lack of connection both with the heavens and earth. The earth's position towards the fallen angel Satan who lives on it is also made clear in its/hers attitude to Adam and Cain. “It” is antithetical.
Thus we can consider, as Christians, the bible as an ur-text that actually exhorts us to repair the breach within ourselves towards God and the earth and to each other so that the earth may once again become a fruitful place. This is eco-criticism coded into the Bible at its very inception, in its nascent phase.
If we read carefully, the opposition is not between the heavenly and earthly but between, on the one hand the heaven and earth conjoined and, on the other hand, the force that was in the serpent that tempted Eve.
This force seems to have as its aim, ultimately, not just the destruction of mankind but also of the earth itself by turning it into thorns and thistles, and not allowing it to feed its own children, by making it use set laws of causality against its children if they go wrong, and thereby, tragically, turn against and destroy itself, in the final analysis.
However the Bible seems to nose-dive after that in terms of ecological concern. Moses's law expands social responsibility amazingly but seems to care nothing for the surrounding habitat or environment or animal rights. The division of animals into clean and unclean ones is a case in point. Even animal husbandry becomes slowly economic. Here too, it is possible to look at it in another way. A friend of mine points out that not gleaning the edges of the field, giving the earth a year of rest every seventh year, not eating anything except a certain limited number of prescribed species can all be seen as ecologically sound practices. But for me personally, the high points in the Bible, ecologically speaking, after the beautiful book of Job that celebrates animal variety and then Noah's care for all living things, are Isaiah pointing out that God doesn't require animal sacrifice, David speaking of how the heaven and earth are full of God's glory and Solomon conversing or at least communing with plants, trees, spiders, ants, horses etc by close observation somewhat akin to a naturalists but perhaps going deeper because he almost suggests what is considered by most a theological fallacy, that these creatures have a soulful kind of ‘intelligence’.
We have to come to the New Testament to see a new era begin in eco-theology with the advent of Jesus. The first noticeable difference is in the parables of Jesus. He harks back to Ezekiel's nature parables in his style but his are better, as are his examples that are homespun and from close observation of nature around him that work well, whether used as similes or metaphors. For the first time after Job and Solomon we see a God who cares for birds of the air(sparrows) and the flowers and grass of the field (lilies). In the wilderness we see Jesus dwelling with wild animals, if we are to believe the narrative in Mark, peacefully. Noah's dove reappears at his baptism, and he rides meekly upon a colt, the young one of an ass. Most eloquent of all is his ability to control nature; fishes, winds, storms and breezes respond to him. He fights for animals in the temple, setting them free , and talks of God as a gardener and himself as a shepherd dealing with fig trees, vineyards and sheep respectively , harking back to David but also looking forward to a new heaven and a new earth. He also behaves like God destroying pigs and a fig tree with impunity but the measuring rod seems to have been taken out of our hands by this Jesus who seems able to act exactly like a force of Nature and not like man , as if he is not only one with God but also with Mother Nature or earth. Nature not only creates, as Jesus does birds in another apocryphal story, but also destroys, and since he is united with God, man and earth in perfect harmony when Jesus dies people are resurrected, the earth grows totally dark and weeps – an eclipse? - , there is storm and thunder and lightning etc. The earth has been traumatized by the death of the first great Eco-warrior but also galvanized to hope that other such warriors will come up. In Paul's letters we read the hope, “creation” groaning for the revelation of the sons of God. We also read of it metaphorically in John's gospel and Paul's letter, of a seed that dies and comes back as something else harking back to the trend-setting parable of the sower and the seed. The journey of a new ecological awareness continues in Peter's vision too, when he understands that all animals are clean.
I understand that my 'reading' of Jesus and aspects of the Bible are not of the usual kind. I have chosen to read the text literally and not figuratively in many points, to bring out the ecological aspect.
The “unity” of my ecological reading, however, is not imposed. For instance, the earth that appears as a she in Genesis appears again as a she in Revelation.
Revelation 12. 16 "And the Earth helped the woman, and the Earth opened her mouth, and swallowed up the flood which the dragon cast out of his mouth."
But this time she is on the side of the “woman clothed with the sun having the stars for a crown, the moon under her feet.” They are perfectly aligned in protecting those who have the same mind of Jesus, against Satan , the old serpent form, the dragon, that wants to destroy all of them. They finally win the battle.
Then comes the millennium, and finally the new earth and new heaven.
Thus the Bible can be seen not only as a spiritual blueprint but also as an ecological one that will restore everything to its rightful place so that in a new earth ruled by Jesus and his disciples who will care for all things well there will be a new dispensation with no ecological problems too.
Unfortunately this side of the Bible seems to have been lost to future generations except for a Blake who wrote of “the marriage of heaven and earth” and also poems like “the tiger” and “the lamb”, and, more relevantly, a Francis of Assisi, a G.M. Hopkins in a poem like “Inversnaid” where he praises “the wild-er-ness and the wet” and perhaps, in India, a Sadhu Sundar Singh (both Francis and Sundar Singh knew how to be at peace with wild animals like their Master), so that it is partly right to speak of the wanton destruction caused by Christians to mother earth and Nature in their zealous evangelizing that concerned only humans. A Ray Bradbury posits telling the gospel to other planets and stars but the idea of a gospel for earth has percolated into the consciousness of Christians too slowly. The Romantics understood the need to connect to the circle of life much, much better. Francis Schaeffer alone glimpsed the need. In one book of his he quotes Jim Morrison, therefore.
"What have they done to the earth? What have they done to our fair sister? Ravaged and plundered and ripped her and bit her. Stuck her with knives in the side of the dawn. And tied her with fences and dragged her down." JIM MORRISON
This is the empathetic voice one wants to hear. It is a voice that connects everything as did St. Francis in his addressing of everything as brother or sister.
The Canticle of the Sun
by Francis of Assisi
Most high, all powerful, all good Lord! All praise is yours, all glory, all honor, and all blessing. To you, alone, Most High, do they belong. No mortal lips are worthy to pronounce your name.
Be praised, my Lord, through all your creatures, especially through my lord Brother Sun, who brings the day; and you give light through him. And he is beautiful and radiant in all his splendor! Of you, Most High, he bears the likeness.
Be praised, my Lord, through Sister Moon and the stars; in the heavens you have made them, precious and beautiful.
Be praised, my Lord, through Brothers Wind and Air, and clouds and storms, and all the weather, through which you give your creatures sustenance.
Be praised, My Lord, through Sister Water; she is very useful, and humble, and precious, and pure.
Be praised, my Lord, through Brother Fire, through whom you brighten the night. He is beautiful and cheerful, and powerful and strong.
Be praised, my Lord, through our sister Mother Earth, who feeds us and rules us, and produces various fruits with colored flowers and herbs.
Be praised, my Lord, through those who forgive for love of you; through those who endure sickness and trial. Happy those who endure in peace, for by you, Most High, they will be crowned.
Be praised, my Lord, through our Sister Bodily Death, from whose embrace no living person can escape. Woe to those who die in mortal sin! Happy those she finds doing your most holy will. The second death can do no harm to them.
Praise and bless my Lord, and give thanks, and serve him with great humility.
(Translated by Bill Barrett from the Umbrian text of the Assisi codex.)
The question is, having traced out the lineage of a Christian eco-theocentricism for my personal satisfaction, primarily addressing the Christian population that consists mainly of evangelicals, fundamentalists etc., in the course of which I’m sure I’ve said nothing new, there being “nothing new under the sun,” how can all this be connected to today’s pressing ecological problems like global warming, the use of coal, carbon footprints, environmental degradation, lack of conservation, the rent in the ozone layer or to a natural disaster like the one that happened to Haiti? Is all this due to the dragon or mother earth in action, to use my own metaphors? And what can ecologically minded people do to bring the earth back on course to avert such natural 'disasters' and bring about a new earth? Or are they not ‘natural’, these new earthquakes etc., but brought upon ourselves by our Cain-like misdeeds, in which is a spiritual remedy the one that should be sought?
My experience in India, Saudi Arabia and presently in Libya has convinced me that India is better off than the so-called Islamic nations in trying to care for the earth. In India the philosophies of monism and ‘advaita’ have no doubt helped and ignorance or lack of awareness is often more the root cause of non-alleviation of environmental problems and concerns than unwillingness. I think the presence of these philosophies act as a healthy balance on other religious philosophies, so that in a place like India the Christians at least are not at all averse to taking suitable measures for sustainable development etc. I do not know much about how other religions in India react to the global crisis regarding environmental issues. In Saudi Arabia and Libya, 2 oil rich nations, the wastage of resources has to be seen to be believed. This is especially so in Saudi Arabia where, for instance, in the university in which I worked lights would be on 24 hours, paper would be used recklessly (in stark contrast to the international school I taught in, in India, where it was compulsory to use two sides and recycle paper) and petrol is never meant to be conserved, to name only three things. Libya is not as bad in its ways, by comparison. However, in Libya too there is a crying lack of awareness. The difference between someone like me who gets regular updates by email from activist political and environmental organizations like Greenpeace, Avaaz etc., in my mail box daily, not to mention emails of local, zonal and national groups and those who are at the other extreme of the information spectrum in that they haven’t even heard of an organization called Greenpeace reflects the uncertainty of post-modernity as a phenomenon in its full measure. Facebook offers ‘green’ internet games but these countries do not encourage games in the public sphere. They are not considered welcome in the spaces of learning as tools and would be labeled a “waste of time.”
In keeping with the concepts of a Red Cross and a Blue Cross, allied to these as a sister institution or asset, what Christians could do is start a Green Cross. The question must arise as to how it would be different in its greenness from other such organizations and how, at the same time, the same or similar, and in or of what its ‘pan-Christianity’ that would still be so that it can be of practical and spiritual use to the entire material worlds of the here and now and the future. Since these issues go beyond this paper, I will not venture there but will end on this abrupt note, constrained as usual by time and space.
*the root can be expanded in different ways using vowels and that changes the meaning, in Hebrew.
By Dr. A.V. Koshy
I want to examine the Bible as an ancient, Asian, religious, eco-critical text and make the effort to find an alternative Christianity within the Christian tradition that may still be other-worldly but is not therefore, as is commonly considered, detrimental to the earth. Au contraire, it is instead beneficial to this world’s ecology. This will of necessity mean a deconstruction of some commonly held or perceived notions of Christian theology as well as of the ecological world’s perception of Christianity as a threat to the future well-being of mankind. My reading has been influenced by Derrida but it does not mean that it is Deridean.
I would like to start with the etymology of the name Adam.
“Adam is traditionally the first human male, but that tradition is presently under attack. See Eve or The Chaotic Set Theory for the counter argument.
Adam is one of five words that indicate a man (words like dude, guy etc). This particular word indicates man as a being created from material; a dustling, or earthling. Adam is the masculine derivation of the root ('dm 25 and 26, Hebrew sounds*). The feminine derivation (adamah 25b, Hebrew sounds) indicates the ruddy earth found in the Middle East and means acre, ground, land. The words (adom, adem 26a, b, Hebrew sounds) indicate the typical red color of that earth.
The name Adam means Earthling.
Other names from this same stock are, Edom - the nickname of Esau - which also means red, ruddy, and Admah.
Other names that have to do with words that mean man are Enosh (Mortal), Gabriel (God's Man), Methushael (Man Of God) and perhaps Zechariah (YHWH's Male) and Ishi (My Man).
A name that may be a playful reference to the name Adam is Javan, Mud Man.”
(http://www.abarim-publications.com/Meaning/Adam.html)
The binary opposition is between the heavenly and the earthly, throughout the traditional reading of the Bible. However the points of reconciliation are also there in an alternative reading of the Bible, in Jesus as he is represented in the gospels, in some of Blake's and Hopkins’ ideas, in Francis of Assisi’s yearning to preach the gospel to "all" etc.
To start with, a reading of some sections of Genesis may be essential. In the first section Adam is shown as one who can eat all the fruits in the garden including of the tree of eternal life, except one, and name – a divine function - all the living creatures. He is given Eve as a helper and it is more or less clear that their job is not looking after the garden or the living creatures but enjoying fellowship with God and remaining in their rightful place in the scheme of things, as the crown( highpoint) of creation.
When they fall, they are not tempted by the serpent, according to my ecological reading, though this can be combated - but either by Satan entering the serpent or Satan coming to Eve in the ‘form’ of a serpent. Having fallen, they are shown to be no longer in their rightful place. God does not want them to use the vegetation for clothing but animal's skins. This might offend an eco-critic. However, the validity of such a decision would depend on the geography of the area that is unknown. But it is also double edged, in that God seems to love plants and trees more than animals. Adam now has to work and vegetarianism is no longer the order of the day. Delight and Paradise is lost to both of them.
When Cain offers fruits etc., to God, God's displeasure may be at the fact that he tried his hand at farming but is unable to do it well. He is unable to bring him the "best produce." Similarly, the same care for agrarian products that should not be wantonly destroyed is perhaps shown. Contrary to expectation the early revelation of God as creator of the people in the land of Nod and the two in Eden- that is, of a special man and a woman who herald the next step in evolution as not just of the human race, ushering in a new age for the race of mankind - is "agrarian" in outlook. Cain is a 'poor' gardener while Abel tends the flock well, though he continues the tradition of slaughtering animals, maybe in remembrance of the story of his parents as to where their clothes came from.
The things written so far have been addressed more to Christians to remove certain innate biases they have developed over the years in reading the Bible, to see it only as a spiritual text.
Now we turn to a very interesting facet in the King James translation of the Bible. I do not know Hebrew or Greek but even in the Amplified Version an echo - two echoes- of what the translators of the KJV brought out cannot be entirely stifled.
It is about the earth as a living being. Adam is earthling -child of the earth - from dust to dust - but the earth itself is different. Blood is also considered living, interestingly, metaphorically.
8And Cain said to his brother, [b]Let us go out to the field. And when they were in the field, Cain rose up against Abel his brother and killed him.(B)
9And the Lord said to Cain, Where is Abel your brother? And he said, I do not know. Am I my brother's keeper?
10And [the Lord] said, What have you done? The voice of your brother's blood is crying to Me from the ground.
11And now you are cursed by reason of the earth, which has opened its mouth to receive your brother's [shed] blood from your hand.
12When you till the ground, it shall no longer yield to you its strength; you shall be a fugitive and a vagabond on the earth [in perpetual exile, a degraded outcast].
The earth has a mouth, - personification - does not want to drink blood, again an agrarian trait, - and turns against its murderous child by appealing to a higher power for justice – “by reason of the earth”. It will not yield its strength from then on to Cain.
Now the interesting thing is this: while the Amplified Bible uses "it" for the earth the KJV uses "she." Which translation is correct? I believe both are. Any scripture worth its salt deals with individuality, family and community as the foundation stones and the Bible which may be the archetype of all Scriptures deals, as it should, first with the individuality of the plural Elohim, with an unmentioned feminine aspect to Him that is hinted at in the verse that says "in the image of God created he them, male and female created he them" in the first version of the story of creation in Genesis, then with a brief mention of a community that seems to be not very relevant - the dwellers of Nod etc, then with mothers , Eve and the Earth and also with family, or children, sons , wives and grandchildren, dealing simultaneously also with the ideas of work, reproduction, fertility, sacrifice ( of flora and fauna) and the formation of new communities. The humility of these early men and women is noticeable in that they understand that they have to be allied with the forces of nature - represented by how Adam's disobedience and Cain's murder is punished symbolically, and literally, both figuratively and metaphorically by references to the earth mother or the living "it" or organism that the earth is that is being displeased with their actions. Thus it will bring forth “thorns and thistles” to Adam for choosing mortality over eternal life and withhold its strength from Cain for murder.
The message is clear if we read it this way. The Deity and the earth preferred sheep-herders and genuine farmers to the artificers and metalworkers that then came up from Cain's line - people like Tubal Cain - the first industrialists, in a sense, because the latter would try to preserve the natural balance of the earth , instead of upsetting it. There had come about a lack of connection both with the heavens and earth. The earth's position towards the fallen angel Satan who lives on it is also made clear in its/hers attitude to Adam and Cain. “It” is antithetical.
Thus we can consider, as Christians, the bible as an ur-text that actually exhorts us to repair the breach within ourselves towards God and the earth and to each other so that the earth may once again become a fruitful place. This is eco-criticism coded into the Bible at its very inception, in its nascent phase.
If we read carefully, the opposition is not between the heavenly and earthly but between, on the one hand the heaven and earth conjoined and, on the other hand, the force that was in the serpent that tempted Eve.
This force seems to have as its aim, ultimately, not just the destruction of mankind but also of the earth itself by turning it into thorns and thistles, and not allowing it to feed its own children, by making it use set laws of causality against its children if they go wrong, and thereby, tragically, turn against and destroy itself, in the final analysis.
However the Bible seems to nose-dive after that in terms of ecological concern. Moses's law expands social responsibility amazingly but seems to care nothing for the surrounding habitat or environment or animal rights. The division of animals into clean and unclean ones is a case in point. Even animal husbandry becomes slowly economic. Here too, it is possible to look at it in another way. A friend of mine points out that not gleaning the edges of the field, giving the earth a year of rest every seventh year, not eating anything except a certain limited number of prescribed species can all be seen as ecologically sound practices. But for me personally, the high points in the Bible, ecologically speaking, after the beautiful book of Job that celebrates animal variety and then Noah's care for all living things, are Isaiah pointing out that God doesn't require animal sacrifice, David speaking of how the heaven and earth are full of God's glory and Solomon conversing or at least communing with plants, trees, spiders, ants, horses etc by close observation somewhat akin to a naturalists but perhaps going deeper because he almost suggests what is considered by most a theological fallacy, that these creatures have a soulful kind of ‘intelligence’.
We have to come to the New Testament to see a new era begin in eco-theology with the advent of Jesus. The first noticeable difference is in the parables of Jesus. He harks back to Ezekiel's nature parables in his style but his are better, as are his examples that are homespun and from close observation of nature around him that work well, whether used as similes or metaphors. For the first time after Job and Solomon we see a God who cares for birds of the air(sparrows) and the flowers and grass of the field (lilies). In the wilderness we see Jesus dwelling with wild animals, if we are to believe the narrative in Mark, peacefully. Noah's dove reappears at his baptism, and he rides meekly upon a colt, the young one of an ass. Most eloquent of all is his ability to control nature; fishes, winds, storms and breezes respond to him. He fights for animals in the temple, setting them free , and talks of God as a gardener and himself as a shepherd dealing with fig trees, vineyards and sheep respectively , harking back to David but also looking forward to a new heaven and a new earth. He also behaves like God destroying pigs and a fig tree with impunity but the measuring rod seems to have been taken out of our hands by this Jesus who seems able to act exactly like a force of Nature and not like man , as if he is not only one with God but also with Mother Nature or earth. Nature not only creates, as Jesus does birds in another apocryphal story, but also destroys, and since he is united with God, man and earth in perfect harmony when Jesus dies people are resurrected, the earth grows totally dark and weeps – an eclipse? - , there is storm and thunder and lightning etc. The earth has been traumatized by the death of the first great Eco-warrior but also galvanized to hope that other such warriors will come up. In Paul's letters we read the hope, “creation” groaning for the revelation of the sons of God. We also read of it metaphorically in John's gospel and Paul's letter, of a seed that dies and comes back as something else harking back to the trend-setting parable of the sower and the seed. The journey of a new ecological awareness continues in Peter's vision too, when he understands that all animals are clean.
I understand that my 'reading' of Jesus and aspects of the Bible are not of the usual kind. I have chosen to read the text literally and not figuratively in many points, to bring out the ecological aspect.
The “unity” of my ecological reading, however, is not imposed. For instance, the earth that appears as a she in Genesis appears again as a she in Revelation.
Revelation 12. 16 "And the Earth helped the woman, and the Earth opened her mouth, and swallowed up the flood which the dragon cast out of his mouth."
But this time she is on the side of the “woman clothed with the sun having the stars for a crown, the moon under her feet.” They are perfectly aligned in protecting those who have the same mind of Jesus, against Satan , the old serpent form, the dragon, that wants to destroy all of them. They finally win the battle.
Then comes the millennium, and finally the new earth and new heaven.
Thus the Bible can be seen not only as a spiritual blueprint but also as an ecological one that will restore everything to its rightful place so that in a new earth ruled by Jesus and his disciples who will care for all things well there will be a new dispensation with no ecological problems too.
Unfortunately this side of the Bible seems to have been lost to future generations except for a Blake who wrote of “the marriage of heaven and earth” and also poems like “the tiger” and “the lamb”, and, more relevantly, a Francis of Assisi, a G.M. Hopkins in a poem like “Inversnaid” where he praises “the wild-er-ness and the wet” and perhaps, in India, a Sadhu Sundar Singh (both Francis and Sundar Singh knew how to be at peace with wild animals like their Master), so that it is partly right to speak of the wanton destruction caused by Christians to mother earth and Nature in their zealous evangelizing that concerned only humans. A Ray Bradbury posits telling the gospel to other planets and stars but the idea of a gospel for earth has percolated into the consciousness of Christians too slowly. The Romantics understood the need to connect to the circle of life much, much better. Francis Schaeffer alone glimpsed the need. In one book of his he quotes Jim Morrison, therefore.
"What have they done to the earth? What have they done to our fair sister? Ravaged and plundered and ripped her and bit her. Stuck her with knives in the side of the dawn. And tied her with fences and dragged her down." JIM MORRISON
This is the empathetic voice one wants to hear. It is a voice that connects everything as did St. Francis in his addressing of everything as brother or sister.
The Canticle of the Sun
by Francis of Assisi
Most high, all powerful, all good Lord! All praise is yours, all glory, all honor, and all blessing. To you, alone, Most High, do they belong. No mortal lips are worthy to pronounce your name.
Be praised, my Lord, through all your creatures, especially through my lord Brother Sun, who brings the day; and you give light through him. And he is beautiful and radiant in all his splendor! Of you, Most High, he bears the likeness.
Be praised, my Lord, through Sister Moon and the stars; in the heavens you have made them, precious and beautiful.
Be praised, my Lord, through Brothers Wind and Air, and clouds and storms, and all the weather, through which you give your creatures sustenance.
Be praised, My Lord, through Sister Water; she is very useful, and humble, and precious, and pure.
Be praised, my Lord, through Brother Fire, through whom you brighten the night. He is beautiful and cheerful, and powerful and strong.
Be praised, my Lord, through our sister Mother Earth, who feeds us and rules us, and produces various fruits with colored flowers and herbs.
Be praised, my Lord, through those who forgive for love of you; through those who endure sickness and trial. Happy those who endure in peace, for by you, Most High, they will be crowned.
Be praised, my Lord, through our Sister Bodily Death, from whose embrace no living person can escape. Woe to those who die in mortal sin! Happy those she finds doing your most holy will. The second death can do no harm to them.
Praise and bless my Lord, and give thanks, and serve him with great humility.
(Translated by Bill Barrett from the Umbrian text of the Assisi codex.)
The question is, having traced out the lineage of a Christian eco-theocentricism for my personal satisfaction, primarily addressing the Christian population that consists mainly of evangelicals, fundamentalists etc., in the course of which I’m sure I’ve said nothing new, there being “nothing new under the sun,” how can all this be connected to today’s pressing ecological problems like global warming, the use of coal, carbon footprints, environmental degradation, lack of conservation, the rent in the ozone layer or to a natural disaster like the one that happened to Haiti? Is all this due to the dragon or mother earth in action, to use my own metaphors? And what can ecologically minded people do to bring the earth back on course to avert such natural 'disasters' and bring about a new earth? Or are they not ‘natural’, these new earthquakes etc., but brought upon ourselves by our Cain-like misdeeds, in which is a spiritual remedy the one that should be sought?
My experience in India, Saudi Arabia and presently in Libya has convinced me that India is better off than the so-called Islamic nations in trying to care for the earth. In India the philosophies of monism and ‘advaita’ have no doubt helped and ignorance or lack of awareness is often more the root cause of non-alleviation of environmental problems and concerns than unwillingness. I think the presence of these philosophies act as a healthy balance on other religious philosophies, so that in a place like India the Christians at least are not at all averse to taking suitable measures for sustainable development etc. I do not know much about how other religions in India react to the global crisis regarding environmental issues. In Saudi Arabia and Libya, 2 oil rich nations, the wastage of resources has to be seen to be believed. This is especially so in Saudi Arabia where, for instance, in the university in which I worked lights would be on 24 hours, paper would be used recklessly (in stark contrast to the international school I taught in, in India, where it was compulsory to use two sides and recycle paper) and petrol is never meant to be conserved, to name only three things. Libya is not as bad in its ways, by comparison. However, in Libya too there is a crying lack of awareness. The difference between someone like me who gets regular updates by email from activist political and environmental organizations like Greenpeace, Avaaz etc., in my mail box daily, not to mention emails of local, zonal and national groups and those who are at the other extreme of the information spectrum in that they haven’t even heard of an organization called Greenpeace reflects the uncertainty of post-modernity as a phenomenon in its full measure. Facebook offers ‘green’ internet games but these countries do not encourage games in the public sphere. They are not considered welcome in the spaces of learning as tools and would be labeled a “waste of time.”
In keeping with the concepts of a Red Cross and a Blue Cross, allied to these as a sister institution or asset, what Christians could do is start a Green Cross. The question must arise as to how it would be different in its greenness from other such organizations and how, at the same time, the same or similar, and in or of what its ‘pan-Christianity’ that would still be so that it can be of practical and spiritual use to the entire material worlds of the here and now and the future. Since these issues go beyond this paper, I will not venture there but will end on this abrupt note, constrained as usual by time and space.
*the root can be expanded in different ways using vowels and that changes the meaning, in Hebrew.
Writing Curriculum
Great Socialist People's Libyan Arab Jamahiriya
University of AL- Margib
College of Education
Department \English
A Model Descriptions of Curriculum
Course Name
1. General Information
B.A., Writing II (4 credits) Course Name
English Section
English Support posts
EL 221 Course code
Academic year 2009-2010 Academic year/ semester
50 x 3 The number of hours
English The language used
Dr A.V.Koshy Course Coordinator / Professor of Article
History and the adoption of the decision
2. Number of weekly hours
Lectures Laboratories Training Total
3, 6 hours , Year II, sections A,B,C. 6 hours
3. Course Objectives
1. Revising Paragraph Writing
2. Planning and writing a whole Composition. (Short essay)
3. Writing a narrative short essay
4. Writing a descriptive short essay
5. Writing an opinion essay
6. Writing cause and effect and comparison and contrast essays
4. Learning outcomes targeted
A. Knowledge and understanding
1. Learn academic writing
2. Explore opinions through written communication
3. Discuss ideas through written communication
4. Share their experiences through written communication
5. Understand different and relevant modes and forms of written communication
6. Tools of writing
B. Mental skills
1. Confidence for college success.
2. Analytical skills.
3. Interpretative skills.
4. Critical thinking skills.
C. Practical skills and professional
1. Understanding structure in writing
2. Exam- taking skills.
3. Consolidating knowledge of mechanics, syntax, etc.
4. Addressing particular rhetorical modes
5. Application in real life situations
6. Mastering forms of writing
D. General skills and transmitted
1. Writing sentences that are connected.
2. Organizing paragraphs.
3. Essay writing.
5. Course Syllabus
Number of lectures The number of hours Course Topics Number
1 2 Introduction of essay 1.
2 4 Body paragraphs 2.
1 2 Conclusion of essay 3.
1 2 Arrangement of sentences, supporting sentences etc. 4.
2 4 Unity & coherence 5.
2 4 Contrast & comparison 6.
2 4 Cause & effect 7.
2 4 Narration 8.
2 4 Description. 9.
2 4 Paragraph outlines 10.
2 4 Expanding . 11.
2 4 Editing & revising 12.
1 2 Planning 13.
3 6 Practice. 14.
6. Learning methods
Analysis of role models Brainstorming & Writing outlines Writing paragraphs Editing & Revising Final drafts.
Analysis of structures of writing Discussing, doing research & writing paragraphs Writing outlines of essays Editing and revising Final drafts
7. Methods of assessment
Number Methods of assessment
Assessment
Date Percentage Notes
1. Mid- term test 1 20%
2. Mid-term test 2 20%
3. Final exam 60%
4.
8. References
Number Reference Authors Publisher Country Publishing
1. Effective Writing 2 The Short Essay Alice Savage/Patricia Mayer Oxford UP USA
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
9. Potential required
Number The potential availability of the required Notes
1. Digital projector in each class.
2. Computer in every classroom
3. Laptop for the teacher
4. Internet connection –wireless in the building.
5. More books and magazines and research journals in library.
6. Staffroom cubicle with desktop, locker etc for teacher.
Instructor…………………………………………………………….
Course Coordinator…A.V.Koshy…………………………………………..
Head of Department…Abdul Salam Bel Hajj……………………………….………
Date………………………………………………………………………
University of AL- Margib
College of Education
Department \English
A Model Descriptions of Curriculum
Course Name
1. General Information
B.A., Writing II (4 credits) Course Name
English Section
English Support posts
EL 221 Course code
Academic year 2009-2010 Academic year/ semester
50 x 3 The number of hours
English The language used
Dr A.V.Koshy Course Coordinator / Professor of Article
History and the adoption of the decision
2. Number of weekly hours
Lectures Laboratories Training Total
3, 6 hours , Year II, sections A,B,C. 6 hours
3. Course Objectives
1. Revising Paragraph Writing
2. Planning and writing a whole Composition. (Short essay)
3. Writing a narrative short essay
4. Writing a descriptive short essay
5. Writing an opinion essay
6. Writing cause and effect and comparison and contrast essays
4. Learning outcomes targeted
A. Knowledge and understanding
1. Learn academic writing
2. Explore opinions through written communication
3. Discuss ideas through written communication
4. Share their experiences through written communication
5. Understand different and relevant modes and forms of written communication
6. Tools of writing
B. Mental skills
1. Confidence for college success.
2. Analytical skills.
3. Interpretative skills.
4. Critical thinking skills.
C. Practical skills and professional
1. Understanding structure in writing
2. Exam- taking skills.
3. Consolidating knowledge of mechanics, syntax, etc.
4. Addressing particular rhetorical modes
5. Application in real life situations
6. Mastering forms of writing
D. General skills and transmitted
1. Writing sentences that are connected.
2. Organizing paragraphs.
3. Essay writing.
5. Course Syllabus
Number of lectures The number of hours Course Topics Number
1 2 Introduction of essay 1.
2 4 Body paragraphs 2.
1 2 Conclusion of essay 3.
1 2 Arrangement of sentences, supporting sentences etc. 4.
2 4 Unity & coherence 5.
2 4 Contrast & comparison 6.
2 4 Cause & effect 7.
2 4 Narration 8.
2 4 Description. 9.
2 4 Paragraph outlines 10.
2 4 Expanding . 11.
2 4 Editing & revising 12.
1 2 Planning 13.
3 6 Practice. 14.
6. Learning methods
Analysis of role models Brainstorming & Writing outlines Writing paragraphs Editing & Revising Final drafts.
Analysis of structures of writing Discussing, doing research & writing paragraphs Writing outlines of essays Editing and revising Final drafts
7. Methods of assessment
Number Methods of assessment
Assessment
Date Percentage Notes
1. Mid- term test 1 20%
2. Mid-term test 2 20%
3. Final exam 60%
4.
8. References
Number Reference Authors Publisher Country Publishing
1. Effective Writing 2 The Short Essay Alice Savage/Patricia Mayer Oxford UP USA
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
9. Potential required
Number The potential availability of the required Notes
1. Digital projector in each class.
2. Computer in every classroom
3. Laptop for the teacher
4. Internet connection –wireless in the building.
5. More books and magazines and research journals in library.
6. Staffroom cubicle with desktop, locker etc for teacher.
Instructor…………………………………………………………….
Course Coordinator…A.V.Koshy…………………………………………..
Head of Department…Abdul Salam Bel Hajj……………………………….………
Date………………………………………………………………………
Spoken English curriculum
Great Socialist People's Libyan Arab Jamahiriya
University of AL- Margib
College of Education
Department\English
A Model Descriptions of Curriculum
Course Name
1. General Information
B.A., Spoken English (4 credits) Course Name
English Section
English Support posts
EL 223 Course code
Academic year, 2009-2010 Academic year/ semester
50 The number of hours
English The language used
Dr A.V. Koshy Course Coordinator / Professor of Article
History and the adoption of the decision
2. Number of weekly hours
Lectures Laboratories Training Total
1 lecture , 2 hours 1 1 2
3. Course Objectives
1. Teaching standard English pronunciation through speaking and listening exercises
2. Teaching content in speaking
3. Teaching grammar and syntax in speaking
4. Teaching vocabulary in connection with speaking
5. Teaching organization or structure in speaking
6. Teaching presentation skills and communicative competence
4. Learning outcomes targeted
A. Knowledge and understanding
1. Of pronunciation.
2. Of vocabulary.
3. Of contextual relevance in speech.
4. Of meaning or semantic relevance in speech.
5. Of the use of formal and informal registers.
6. Of organization and grammar and syntax.
B. Mental skills
1. Thinking in the target language.
2. Mastering appropriate audience related forms of expression.
3. Mastering suitable expressions.
4. Mastering communication in its nuances.
C. Practical skills and professional
1. Confidence and fluency in expression and communication in day to day real life situations.
2. Confidence and fluency in public speaking.
3. Confidence and fluency in addressing an audience or raising questions & answering in a discussion
4. Confidence and fluency in facing an interview.
5. Confidence and fluency in speaking in academic contexts
6. Confidence and fluency in speaking in interpersonal and job contexts.
D. General skills and transmitted
1. Appearance & punctuality.
2. Body lanaguage , gestures, facial expressions, dress code.
3. Linguistic and communicative competence
5. Course Syllabus
Number of lectures The number of hours Course Topics Number
1 2 Vocabulary 1.
4 8 Pronunciation 2.
1 2 Grammar 3.
1 2 Syntax 4.
5 10 Listening to passages 5.
3 6 Organization 6.
2 4 Content 7.
3 6 Practice 8.
5 10 Presentation 9.
10.
11.
12.
13.
14.
6. Learning methods
Audio-visual method.
Practice method.
7. Methods of assessment
Number Methods of assessment
Assessment
Date Percentage Notes
1. Mid-term test 1 20%
2. Mid-term test 2 20%
3. Final exam 60%
4.
8. References
Number Reference Authors Publisher Country Publishing
1. Let’s Talk 3 second edition Leo Jones Cambridge UP USA
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
9. Potential required
Number The potential availability of the required Notes
1. CD copies for teachers and students
2. Enough copies of texts in libraries.
3. Internet in all classrooms
4. Computer in all classrooms
5. Digital projector in all classrooms
6. Teacher cubicle, laptop, CD player and desk top computer plus locker
Instructor…………………………………………………………….
Course Coordinator……A.V.Koshy………………………………………..
Head of Department……Abdul Salam Bel Hajj……………………………….………
Date………………………………………………………………………
University of AL- Margib
College of Education
Department\English
A Model Descriptions of Curriculum
Course Name
1. General Information
B.A., Spoken English (4 credits) Course Name
English Section
English Support posts
EL 223 Course code
Academic year, 2009-2010 Academic year/ semester
50 The number of hours
English The language used
Dr A.V. Koshy Course Coordinator / Professor of Article
History and the adoption of the decision
2. Number of weekly hours
Lectures Laboratories Training Total
1 lecture , 2 hours 1 1 2
3. Course Objectives
1. Teaching standard English pronunciation through speaking and listening exercises
2. Teaching content in speaking
3. Teaching grammar and syntax in speaking
4. Teaching vocabulary in connection with speaking
5. Teaching organization or structure in speaking
6. Teaching presentation skills and communicative competence
4. Learning outcomes targeted
A. Knowledge and understanding
1. Of pronunciation.
2. Of vocabulary.
3. Of contextual relevance in speech.
4. Of meaning or semantic relevance in speech.
5. Of the use of formal and informal registers.
6. Of organization and grammar and syntax.
B. Mental skills
1. Thinking in the target language.
2. Mastering appropriate audience related forms of expression.
3. Mastering suitable expressions.
4. Mastering communication in its nuances.
C. Practical skills and professional
1. Confidence and fluency in expression and communication in day to day real life situations.
2. Confidence and fluency in public speaking.
3. Confidence and fluency in addressing an audience or raising questions & answering in a discussion
4. Confidence and fluency in facing an interview.
5. Confidence and fluency in speaking in academic contexts
6. Confidence and fluency in speaking in interpersonal and job contexts.
D. General skills and transmitted
1. Appearance & punctuality.
2. Body lanaguage , gestures, facial expressions, dress code.
3. Linguistic and communicative competence
5. Course Syllabus
Number of lectures The number of hours Course Topics Number
1 2 Vocabulary 1.
4 8 Pronunciation 2.
1 2 Grammar 3.
1 2 Syntax 4.
5 10 Listening to passages 5.
3 6 Organization 6.
2 4 Content 7.
3 6 Practice 8.
5 10 Presentation 9.
10.
11.
12.
13.
14.
6. Learning methods
Audio-visual method.
Practice method.
7. Methods of assessment
Number Methods of assessment
Assessment
Date Percentage Notes
1. Mid-term test 1 20%
2. Mid-term test 2 20%
3. Final exam 60%
4.
8. References
Number Reference Authors Publisher Country Publishing
1. Let’s Talk 3 second edition Leo Jones Cambridge UP USA
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
9. Potential required
Number The potential availability of the required Notes
1. CD copies for teachers and students
2. Enough copies of texts in libraries.
3. Internet in all classrooms
4. Computer in all classrooms
5. Digital projector in all classrooms
6. Teacher cubicle, laptop, CD player and desk top computer plus locker
Instructor…………………………………………………………….
Course Coordinator……A.V.Koshy………………………………………..
Head of Department……Abdul Salam Bel Hajj……………………………….………
Date………………………………………………………………………
Reading comprehension curriculum
Great Socialist People's Libyan Arab Jamahiriya
University of AL- Margib
College of Education
Department \English
A Model Descriptions of Curriculum
Course Name
1. General Information
Reading Comprehension I (4 credits), B.A. Course Name
English Section
English Support posts
EL 110 Course code
Academic year.(2009 -2010) Academic year/ semester
50 x 3 The number of hours
English The language used
Dr Koshy A.V. Course Coordinator / Professor of Article
History and the adoption of the decision
2. Number of weekly hours
Lectures Laboratories Training Total
3 lectures, 2 hours each, for 3 sections (Year 1, A,C, & D groups) 6
3. Course Objectives
1. Develop vocabulary.
2. Develop and improve fluency in reading. (skimming and scanning)
3. Acquisition of basic spelling rules
4. Develop semantic understanding – grasping meaning, the interaction of ideas etc., in surface and deep reading.
5. Develop knowledge and use of grammar and syntax
6. Develop reading strategies to deal with any kind of text.
4. Learning outcomes targeted
A. Knowledge and understanding
1. Identifying the meaning of words from the context.
2. Finding main ideas in paragraphs
3. Predicting the topic
4. Recognizing the point of view
5. Recognizing reference words
6. Recognizing signal words
B. Mental skills
1. Reading faster and more fluently, effectively
2. Scanning for information
3. Skimming for gist
4. Practicing intensive and extensive reading.
C. Practical skills and professional
1. Make students skilled, strategic readers.
2. Learn strategies necessary for academic work.
3. Make students fluent, confident readers.
4. Increase motivation.
5. Increase vocabulary knowledge
6. Empower for working environment by instilling work ethic.
D. General skills and transmitted
1. Punctuality.
2. Completing work- in class and at home.
3. Interpersonal development in group projects.
5. Course Syllabus for a Year
Number of lectures The number of hours Course Topics Number
1 2 Vocabulary building 1.
1 2 Grammar development 2.
1 2 Syntax development 3.
2 4 Pronunciation improvement. 4.
3 6 Listening. 5.
3 6 Timed reading. 6.
4 8 Comprehension of intensive reading passages 7.
3 6 Comprehension of extensive passages 8.
4 8 Developing skills like reading for surface and deep meaning. 9.
3 6 Developing fluency using strategies like scanning and skimming 10.
11.
12.
13.
14.
6. Learning methods
Reading and discussion for comprehension. Grammar development exercises. Vocabulary building exercises. Listening exercises for pronunciation and comprehension. Critical thinking
Exercises.
Timed reading exercises for fluency. For developing speed. For skimming For scanning Reading aloud for improving pronunciation.
7. Methods of assessment
Number Methods of assessment
Assessment
Date Percentage Notes
1. Mid-term test 1 20%
2. Mid-term test 2 20%
3. Final exam. 60%
4.
8. References
Number Reference Authors Publisher Country Publishing
1. Cover to Cover 1: Reading comprehension & fluency. R. R. Day & J. Yamanaka Oxford UP USA
2. Intermediate Comprehension Passages Donn Byrne Longman UK
3.
4.
5.
6.
9. Potential required
Number The potential availability of the required Notes
1. Digital projector in every classroom
2. Computer in every classroom
3. Laptop for the teacher
4. Internet connection –wireless in the building.
5. CD player for every teacher
6. Staffroom cubicle with desktop, locker etc for teacher.
Instructor…………………………………………………………….
Course Coordinator…A.V.Koshy…………………………………………..
Head of Department…Abdul Salam Bel Hajj………………………………….………
Date………………………………………………………………………
University of AL- Margib
College of Education
Department \English
A Model Descriptions of Curriculum
Course Name
1. General Information
Reading Comprehension I (4 credits), B.A. Course Name
English Section
English Support posts
EL 110 Course code
Academic year.(2009 -2010) Academic year/ semester
50 x 3 The number of hours
English The language used
Dr Koshy A.V. Course Coordinator / Professor of Article
History and the adoption of the decision
2. Number of weekly hours
Lectures Laboratories Training Total
3 lectures, 2 hours each, for 3 sections (Year 1, A,C, & D groups) 6
3. Course Objectives
1. Develop vocabulary.
2. Develop and improve fluency in reading. (skimming and scanning)
3. Acquisition of basic spelling rules
4. Develop semantic understanding – grasping meaning, the interaction of ideas etc., in surface and deep reading.
5. Develop knowledge and use of grammar and syntax
6. Develop reading strategies to deal with any kind of text.
4. Learning outcomes targeted
A. Knowledge and understanding
1. Identifying the meaning of words from the context.
2. Finding main ideas in paragraphs
3. Predicting the topic
4. Recognizing the point of view
5. Recognizing reference words
6. Recognizing signal words
B. Mental skills
1. Reading faster and more fluently, effectively
2. Scanning for information
3. Skimming for gist
4. Practicing intensive and extensive reading.
C. Practical skills and professional
1. Make students skilled, strategic readers.
2. Learn strategies necessary for academic work.
3. Make students fluent, confident readers.
4. Increase motivation.
5. Increase vocabulary knowledge
6. Empower for working environment by instilling work ethic.
D. General skills and transmitted
1. Punctuality.
2. Completing work- in class and at home.
3. Interpersonal development in group projects.
5. Course Syllabus for a Year
Number of lectures The number of hours Course Topics Number
1 2 Vocabulary building 1.
1 2 Grammar development 2.
1 2 Syntax development 3.
2 4 Pronunciation improvement. 4.
3 6 Listening. 5.
3 6 Timed reading. 6.
4 8 Comprehension of intensive reading passages 7.
3 6 Comprehension of extensive passages 8.
4 8 Developing skills like reading for surface and deep meaning. 9.
3 6 Developing fluency using strategies like scanning and skimming 10.
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14.
6. Learning methods
Reading and discussion for comprehension. Grammar development exercises. Vocabulary building exercises. Listening exercises for pronunciation and comprehension. Critical thinking
Exercises.
Timed reading exercises for fluency. For developing speed. For skimming For scanning Reading aloud for improving pronunciation.
7. Methods of assessment
Number Methods of assessment
Assessment
Date Percentage Notes
1. Mid-term test 1 20%
2. Mid-term test 2 20%
3. Final exam. 60%
4.
8. References
Number Reference Authors Publisher Country Publishing
1. Cover to Cover 1: Reading comprehension & fluency. R. R. Day & J. Yamanaka Oxford UP USA
2. Intermediate Comprehension Passages Donn Byrne Longman UK
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9. Potential required
Number The potential availability of the required Notes
1. Digital projector in every classroom
2. Computer in every classroom
3. Laptop for the teacher
4. Internet connection –wireless in the building.
5. CD player for every teacher
6. Staffroom cubicle with desktop, locker etc for teacher.
Instructor…………………………………………………………….
Course Coordinator…A.V.Koshy…………………………………………..
Head of Department…Abdul Salam Bel Hajj………………………………….………
Date………………………………………………………………………
Anton Corbijn –Control.
This is his first directorial venture. The movie is now in black and white.
The story goes like this. A young boy called Curtis who likes poetry impresses his friend’s girl by quoting Wordsworth. He does drugs in the form of pill popping and likes David Bowie and Sex Pistols. He marries said girlfriend. He writes powerful poetry and goes on to become the singer and lyricist for a “tight” post-punk band called Joy Division. Picked up by a new label and a good manager they seem set for success, when Ian, the lead singer, whose wife is pregnant by now, finds life suddenly putting him on a slide. He holds a job at an employment agency. One day he finds a job for a differently-abled kid. Another day he suddenly comes face to face with epilepsy in the form of a girl who collapses in his office. His love for his wife notwithstanding, he soon begins to cool off in his ardor to her, realizing that they are different; she being solidly middle class and he the aesthetic bohemian. He spends sleepless nights, writing dark lyrics or out on gigs with the band. One day he collapses while going to a show, and is diagnosed with epilepsy. There is no cure. Meds, and sleepiness that comes as a result, ensure that soon he has to choose between his daily job and rock. He opts for his first love. One day while Joy Division begins to gather a cult following because of songs like Warsaw and She’s Lost Control -inspired by his wife’s inability to coax him into bed in the film - a journalist called Annik lands up from Belgium to interview them. Her looks and exotic name attract Ian and they fall in love with each other. She is drawn to his magnetic and charismatic Morrison-like voice and brooding presence on stage as well as the inscrutable personality that she thinks he is. The darkness of his depression lightens slightly when she is there. Soon his conscience and heart begin a fight with each other, in which he gets no help from anybody around him, at the end of which he commits suicide. His lyrics get progressively darker and more brilliant meanwhile, as he writes of his life, and his performances become more intense but they break him to the point where, along with his increasingly frequent episodes of epilepsy and first failed attempt at suicide, even going on stage becomes torture. He dies at the young age of 23.
I had heard of Joy Division before but not heard them. I feel this movie is the perfect introduction to the work of this young ‘genius’ and band because it is a restrained work. Anton Corbijn seems to know his Bergman and fine performances by the main actor and actress, sensitive editing and good camerawork all help to make this movie a classic in the rock music films genre. While not surprised at the awards it got and the fact that it is based on the memoirs of Ian’s wife and first hand experiences of the director as a photographer with the band, what really struck me was the maturity with which Corbijn handles the life in question – by not connecting it with rock’s common myths of sex, drugs and rock n’ roll , for one thing, except subtly and in passing, but instead showing the inspiration for Ian’s poetry and getting us to empathize with him and his wife equally, something rarely tried in my experience before. In fact, it is Annik who comes out weaker, maybe because of where the script comes from. It is the ordinariness of Ian, the working man, who is caught in the sudden tragedy of epilepsy that takes him out of himself into being someone other than who he is and lures him to his doom that haunts us ultimately. That and the brilliantly shadowy live halls and bedroom scenes, not to mention the photomontage of portraiture of the characters that recurs constantly through the movie and the brief live band vignettes , the quotes and the shots in the recording studio.
In 2007 the movie was made. It got awards. If Corbijn makes another movie I, for one, will watch. Not to talk of my having begun to read Joy Division’s (Ian Curtis’s) lyrics and listen to their music.
The story goes like this. A young boy called Curtis who likes poetry impresses his friend’s girl by quoting Wordsworth. He does drugs in the form of pill popping and likes David Bowie and Sex Pistols. He marries said girlfriend. He writes powerful poetry and goes on to become the singer and lyricist for a “tight” post-punk band called Joy Division. Picked up by a new label and a good manager they seem set for success, when Ian, the lead singer, whose wife is pregnant by now, finds life suddenly putting him on a slide. He holds a job at an employment agency. One day he finds a job for a differently-abled kid. Another day he suddenly comes face to face with epilepsy in the form of a girl who collapses in his office. His love for his wife notwithstanding, he soon begins to cool off in his ardor to her, realizing that they are different; she being solidly middle class and he the aesthetic bohemian. He spends sleepless nights, writing dark lyrics or out on gigs with the band. One day he collapses while going to a show, and is diagnosed with epilepsy. There is no cure. Meds, and sleepiness that comes as a result, ensure that soon he has to choose between his daily job and rock. He opts for his first love. One day while Joy Division begins to gather a cult following because of songs like Warsaw and She’s Lost Control -inspired by his wife’s inability to coax him into bed in the film - a journalist called Annik lands up from Belgium to interview them. Her looks and exotic name attract Ian and they fall in love with each other. She is drawn to his magnetic and charismatic Morrison-like voice and brooding presence on stage as well as the inscrutable personality that she thinks he is. The darkness of his depression lightens slightly when she is there. Soon his conscience and heart begin a fight with each other, in which he gets no help from anybody around him, at the end of which he commits suicide. His lyrics get progressively darker and more brilliant meanwhile, as he writes of his life, and his performances become more intense but they break him to the point where, along with his increasingly frequent episodes of epilepsy and first failed attempt at suicide, even going on stage becomes torture. He dies at the young age of 23.
I had heard of Joy Division before but not heard them. I feel this movie is the perfect introduction to the work of this young ‘genius’ and band because it is a restrained work. Anton Corbijn seems to know his Bergman and fine performances by the main actor and actress, sensitive editing and good camerawork all help to make this movie a classic in the rock music films genre. While not surprised at the awards it got and the fact that it is based on the memoirs of Ian’s wife and first hand experiences of the director as a photographer with the band, what really struck me was the maturity with which Corbijn handles the life in question – by not connecting it with rock’s common myths of sex, drugs and rock n’ roll , for one thing, except subtly and in passing, but instead showing the inspiration for Ian’s poetry and getting us to empathize with him and his wife equally, something rarely tried in my experience before. In fact, it is Annik who comes out weaker, maybe because of where the script comes from. It is the ordinariness of Ian, the working man, who is caught in the sudden tragedy of epilepsy that takes him out of himself into being someone other than who he is and lures him to his doom that haunts us ultimately. That and the brilliantly shadowy live halls and bedroom scenes, not to mention the photomontage of portraiture of the characters that recurs constantly through the movie and the brief live band vignettes , the quotes and the shots in the recording studio.
In 2007 the movie was made. It got awards. If Corbijn makes another movie I, for one, will watch. Not to talk of my having begun to read Joy Division’s (Ian Curtis’s) lyrics and listen to their music.
An Introduction to Othello
Shakespeare has long been considered the greatest dramatist the world has ever seen. This is despite the constant and continuous attempt by other great playwrights and critics alike to dethrone his claim to such a title. If we look at his plays we can see why. His life in England as a Catholic among Protestants, as a middle- class townsman among city-bred riff raff and nobility, as a gentleman who became rich to buy his rank, and as an actor who became a playwright and director who was successful to the point of becoming part owner of a theatre called the Globe, as well as becoming the powerful Queen Elizabeth’s and her successor King James’s favorite writer, equipped him for such a task. The personal ups and downs of his life, such as not having a classical education, marriage when young to a woman seven years older than him called Anne Hathaway, the death of a son Hamnet, a second love affair etc., also made him sensitive to many nuances that ably and ideally fit the dramatic. He was England’s Dante, doubtless, aiding and abetting his country’s swift rise by being the genius of its language and moving it towards a rich and plural form of democracy. His claim to greatness shines through every play of his but never more than in his famous tragedies. Of these, for long Othello has been a favorite in the Arab nations, partly because of the choice of a Moor for hero. Both in Merchant of Venice and in Othello we find a theme Shakespeare dwells on powerfully, perhaps due to his experiences as the member of a Catholic minority in England, the theme of the virtuous outsider. He constantly subverts British parochialism that was against the French, the Catholics, the Jews, the Arabs and the blacks in his many plays, often even overtly, as in Othello, by setting the scene elsewhere and openly laughing at the English by calling them all mad as in Hamlet. In this sense he was definitely a child of the Renaissance and aware that internationalism was the future path that should be taken. No playwright handles examining what virtue is and what being human means as deftly or in such glorious detail as Shakespeare does. While artists are often looked down upon for their morals by a sensation mongering public that tries to find out every detail of their lives to criticize unjustly, this does not mean that all other men are perfect or that artists are not moral in their art. The same holds true for Shakespeare. The play’s greatness lies in Shakespeare’s wizardry in weaving together a plot that goes far deeper than meets the eye in bringing into play the question of ancient, hidden antipathies regarding religion, race and class. Underlying this, even deeper , is the moral fabric that makes Othello succeed beyond all doubt, whereby Shakespeare warns men of their tendency to easily overlook their own faults yet to never forgive them in their partners of the fair sex. In a time when psychology and psychiatry were not yet born he studies Othello as an example of virtue that has in it a tragic flaw, the flaw of an inferiority complex which breeds suspicion that leads on to a murderous jealousy, to the point where he kills his own wife because he suspects her , though she is the one whom he loves more dearly than any man ever loved a woman. Shakespeare’s consummate study of Othello’s fall, while a masterpiece, has many a side to it seldom looked at. For instance, Iago, that perfect representation of evil in his “motiveless malignity, is able to bring about a tragedy of such colossal proportions only because of the swarthy Othello’s perception that in Desdemona’s society, because of his place of origin and the color of his skin , he is viewed as an outsider. The tragedy’s inception, thus, is not from Iago but from Brabantio, Desdemona’s father, who states at the outset of the play, when Desdemona elopes with Othello and the state stands by Othello’s and her wishes against his, that having fooled him though he was her father she would one day fool Othello too. The scene then shifts to the five main characters involved in the macabre drama that unfolds, namely Cassio ( the supposed suitor of Desdemona, according to Iago), Iago (the devil incarnate), Desdemona, Emilia (Iago’s wife and Desdemona’s maid in waiting) and Othello himself. Using a handkerchief his wife Emilia steals for him from Desdemona because she is her servant, Iago makes Othello believe that Desdemona has been unfaithful to him and is now in love with Cassio. The juxtapositions of place, race and color are once again subtly suggested. Desdemona is not only fair but she has golden hair and Cassio is quite handsome. Slowly convinced, Othello decides to take the helm of fate into his own hand, throwing all caution to the winds regarding the good sense of his actions, being tormented by anguish at the thought that Desdemona has been unfaithful, and he enters their bedroom one night in the tragic effort to bring things to a final head. Watch the final scene we understand both what happened on that fateful night and Shakespeare’s unquestionable greatness in the English language and the dramatic art, not to mention his great humanism
Tuesday, February 02, 2010
Thursday, January 21, 2010
Another channel I figure in on youtube.
This is the channel of my friend with whom I did the video that got so many hits. I used my niece's photographs - ones that she took - for it mainly.
His name is Solomon Raju Kama.
http://www.youtube.com/user/unosolomono
His name is Solomon Raju Kama.
http://www.youtube.com/user/unosolomono
This was the poem I submitted that got shortlisted in Angelic Dynamo. - Meditations on Death
meditations on death.
for keith douglas
1
suicide is simple
takes one
no second
death
takes all
a whole fucking
lifetime
death and i
are won
2
when death
a mosquito
approaches
a stone,
a shadow
i
fall/s on it
is there a hand
behind the wings
can squash it?
or under the stone
can remove it?
a slight weight
it shifts about
uneasy, flutters
till it settles
abrupt or slow
perceptible
on its shadow
weightless
ly
ergonomics:
if you or i die
death "becomes" us
a dream
dissipates
smoke
nothing left
except, maybe
a cross become crown?
3.
The mosquito drinks my blood. i do not like it. i kill the mosquito. i am death.
Death kills me later. it does not like it that i took its place. i drank its blood.
Who kills death? does god? god drinks death's blood.
Mosquito, i, mankind and breath
Return to the no thing we all came from.
All things return to god behind death.
4
when you or i die
death becomes "us".
are we its shadows?
is death then, the Real?
i do not believe
we who believe
in words of power
the power of words
in the word love
the desire of ages
dayspring from high
bright morning star
will not die
but sing on
come back to life
e'en if we die
because of the heat
the word- fire of
the fiery image
of love that dost
conquer us all
& fortune
favouring
bestowing
its virtue
on the bold & the brave
and the ones lovelorn
on the cold and the grave
and the ones lovelorn
singing this poem
loud and clear
the poem of love
the one, eternal poem.
--
A.V.Koshy
for keith douglas
1
suicide is simple
takes one
no second
death
takes all
a whole fucking
lifetime
death and i
are won
2
when death
a mosquito
approaches
a stone,
a shadow
i
fall/s on it
is there a hand
behind the wings
can squash it?
or under the stone
can remove it?
a slight weight
it shifts about
uneasy, flutters
till it settles
abrupt or slow
perceptible
on its shadow
weightless
ly
ergonomics:
if you or i die
death "becomes" us
a dream
dissipates
smoke
nothing left
except, maybe
a cross become crown?
3.
The mosquito drinks my blood. i do not like it. i kill the mosquito. i am death.
Death kills me later. it does not like it that i took its place. i drank its blood.
Who kills death? does god? god drinks death's blood.
Mosquito, i, mankind and breath
Return to the no thing we all came from.
All things return to god behind death.
4
when you or i die
death becomes "us".
are we its shadows?
is death then, the Real?
i do not believe
we who believe
in words of power
the power of words
in the word love
the desire of ages
dayspring from high
bright morning star
will not die
but sing on
come back to life
e'en if we die
because of the heat
the word- fire of
the fiery image
of love that dost
conquer us all
& fortune
favouring
bestowing
its virtue
on the bold & the brave
and the ones lovelorn
on the cold and the grave
and the ones lovelorn
singing this poem
loud and clear
the poem of love
the one, eternal poem.
--
A.V.Koshy
For the record.
My poem Meditations on Death - for Keith Douglas was shortlisted by Angelic Dynamo.
Alexander Freer: This week:
The Swallows Before Dawn by George Freek
The second coming by Bobby Larson
Meditations on Death by A.V. Koshy
14 December 2009 at 00:12 · Comment ·LikeUnlike · Report
It lost.
It was on the net but now I'm unable to find it, so I can't put it here seemingly as a net snapshot to show it in the form in which it was shortlisted.
Alexander Freer: This week:
The Swallows Before Dawn by George Freek
The second coming by Bobby Larson
Meditations on Death by A.V. Koshy
14 December 2009 at 00:12 · Comment ·LikeUnlike · Report
It lost.
It was on the net but now I'm unable to find it, so I can't put it here seemingly as a net snapshot to show it in the form in which it was shortlisted.
Hits
What do the number of hits one gets signify? Does it mean you are good at what you are doing?
My video on my autistic son has got more than 5000 hits.I put it in three places.
The hits keep mounting in youtube, in academici for a poem I wrote and I did get a lot of hits on educatorslogin.com, writing as learnertransmitter, while the place was alive and kicking.
However I also have places where I get no hits or zero.
Strange things happen on the net. An article I wrote on Declan Galbraith's song has surfaced elsewhere.
http://ego_you.totallyexplained.com/
My videos proliferate endlessly. The tagging does it.
My Facebook notes are read if I tag people.
Well , it all makes life a litle more interesting if nothing else.
Still have a long way to go.
I got votes for my poem by canvassing.
However things on the net are also fluid , you appear and disapear, I don't know if anything on the net has long life.
I remember writing a paper on Paradjanov that appeared in various places, as did two of my other papers but now those links have all been wiped out.
My video on my autistic son has got more than 5000 hits.I put it in three places.
The hits keep mounting in youtube, in academici for a poem I wrote and I did get a lot of hits on educatorslogin.com, writing as learnertransmitter, while the place was alive and kicking.
However I also have places where I get no hits or zero.
Strange things happen on the net. An article I wrote on Declan Galbraith's song has surfaced elsewhere.
http://ego_you.totallyexplained.com/
My videos proliferate endlessly. The tagging does it.
My Facebook notes are read if I tag people.
Well , it all makes life a litle more interesting if nothing else.
Still have a long way to go.
I got votes for my poem by canvassing.
However things on the net are also fluid , you appear and disapear, I don't know if anything on the net has long life.
I remember writing a paper on Paradjanov that appeared in various places, as did two of my other papers but now those links have all been wiped out.
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