TSL Prompt Translation from any language to any language April 28th

 TSL's Napowrimo Translation Prompt given by Gauri Dixit Take 3

I am translating

Sunita Singh

's poem

I take off my shoes and walk in

The gargantuan peepul scowls

its brown serpents stretching to the floor

as I move away

its hissing leaves shake in anger

Inside -

the red verandah floor

seems like alta on my soles

or blood

I enter the small room

metallic eyes stare at me

digging deep -

a hole bleeds

My translation:

Shoesooriyittu njaan akatheyku nadakunnu

Bheemamaya bodhi bhibhatsamaya mukham kaattunnu

athinte bhoomiyude niramulla paambukal nilam thodunnathu vare neelunnu

njaan maari pokumbol

athinte elakal pambukale poley irekkunnu

Akathu

chuvanna verandayude chuvappu

alta pole ente paadangalil padarunnu

rakhtham poley

Njaan aa cherumuriyil kayarunnu

lohyathulyamaya kannukal enne thurichu nokkunnu

entho ennil ninnu kuzhichedukkaan shremikunnathupole

oru kuzhiyil ninnu chora olikunnu

Take 2 of TSL's Napowrimo Prompt of translation April 28th

I translate

Gauri Dixit

's poem into Malayalam

Here is her poem:

You took away my clothes

And the shame that was caught in their threads

There is nothing

Do you realize

There is absolutely nothing

That you have on me now

There is nothing on me

That I owe you or this world

You took away everything

And left me a free bird

I need no rings

I need no wings

The sky is in me

So is the sea

Here is my translation:

Ningal ente vastrangale eduthumaatti

avayude noollukalil pettirunna lajjayum

ini onnum

ningal manasillakunnundo

ini yathonnum

entemel ningalkilla

Entemel ningalko

Ee lokathino

oru kadavum ini parayan illa

Ellaam eduthu kalanju

Enne our swathanthramaya pakshiyaaki vittu

Enikku mothirangal aavishyamilla

Chirukukal aavishyamilla

Aakasham enillaanu

Sagaravum